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 Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2007 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. interesting story line..^_^ How long is this fic going to be .. do you have any clue??
 Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2007 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I guess that Youko did come out to play. Wow, you're the best. I just don't know what else to say. Hope to see another update soon
 Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2007 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was rlly lyk wow omg just.. update soon lol
 Reviewed By: silver_pup [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2007 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
woot for youko! >.< kurama's getting attached, what will he do when hiei steps into the picture? not that u will tell me, that would rumen the whole fic. now yusuke just needs to go all demon, what would kurama do? Punish yusuke or just go along for the ride? *hits head* i'll just wait for the next chapter
 Title: cat happy:)
Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2007 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i have read every chapter and so far i love it this is so cool i can see Kuroma just like this before he became a humane so i can see it now for him to keep it up it's realy a good story.
 Reviewed By: T-girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2007 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am in love with your work my dear! You are such a wonderful writer that I feel tremors racing up my spine when I read your stories. Though may I ask you to update "Night Of the Blood Red Moon" I can't help but anticipate its revival! Love, T-girl (aka T-gal or psycho_t_girl)
 Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2007 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh nice plz update soon
 Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2007 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have to agree that it would be interesting to see Youko. Will Yusuke ever learn? Hope you update again, I really want to see what happens.
 Reviewed By: silver_pup [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2007 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Loved the darker side of kurama lol poor yusuke. Just wanted to know if u have ever thought of actually having kurama fully change into youko, don't know how u would write that into the story just thought it would be a another dark flare to the story. u have yusuke down no need to worry about ooc-ness
 Reviewed By: Terra [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would have to say this is a first for me. At first I didn't think anyone could pull off a good hiei/yusuke, then u go and write ur one-shot 'Under The Influence' the first hiei/yusuke that I've read and now I'm hooked on the paring. And now u put kurama into the mix and do what i though no one could do, writ a kurama/yusuke story that I fell in love within the first chapter. kurama was a little ooc at the start then i reread it and he was more youko kurama then just kurama and the ooc went away, u really put it together and made the characters fit with little ooc. *bows* here is to ur fantastic writing! *sits down* waiting for the next chapter :)
 Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl^^  On: July 06, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want to say this story is like a train wreck... But in a good way. This is definitely not like anything I expected. Yet another great story. You can't help but keep reading. ^^;;; Here's hoping you continue.
 Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2007 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg wooow this is intense update soon!
 Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2007 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is the first this type of story has held my interest. I love all the detail you use. I hope you continue this one, I want to see what happens. I also love your drawing of Yusuke that has the same title.
 Reviewed By: ariearie  On: July 04, 2007 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
lover you story hey whated to ask if you would write a kurama/kagome/hiei/yusuke story please your really got lemons
 Title: cat happy:)
Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2007 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooohhhh gods what can i sat shit that is good iso hpe that there is more i so hope. if not i will kill you that is to good to be stoped there.
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