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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 10:40 CST
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As I've said before, this story is sick, fucked up and disturbing. And beyond well written, fantastic, and a very interesting take on a complicated character like Kurama. Definitely not what I expected when I first started reading this over a year ago, and not what I expected even now. Definitely worth reading, and one I beg you to update. As such, a continuation of this story is not just encouraged, it is DEMANDED. Seriously, update this shit yo! Ja ne.
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: Dove_Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and I read ALL the time. I've never even imagined a side of Kurama like this, and frankly, it kinda scares me. But I love it no less for that. lol I do think Hiei may possibly be acting a bit more... nice, than he usually is, but I can't pay too much attention to that compared to Kurama's behavior. It's quite a bit more on the darker side of him, but you definitely don't allow him to lose the amazingness that is Kurama. I've always loved Kurama, and under normal circumstances I would be plagued with the urge to kill you for making him the bad guy in this. But I found myself totally shocked in chapter 6, when Youko took Yusuke off the contraption, to be silently urging Yusuke to infuriate Youko beyond the extremes and start moaning Hiei's name as though it were Hiei instead of Youko. You are the first person to ever turn me against my bishie(next to Hiei) that way, and for that, you must have applause... Overall though, it is an amazing story, I love it, and I can't wait for the next chapter of it. :D
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Title: Loss for words....
Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow......tht was one of the best fics i've ever read! Plz update soon i'm sooo anxious to see what happens next!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: bellhopper On: October 31, 2007 20:22 CDT
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Your story is so intense it actually made me blush and turn away from the computer. XD! You must update please!!
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Reviewed By: T-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 13:05 CDT
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I really hope nobody else dies! This is going a lot further than i thought! Wow! so much drama and horror!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 19:00 CDT
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OMG Kurama won't quit just die already he's pissing me off. update soon
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 18:39 CDT
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Interesting turn of events. [And Hiei is kawaii^_^]
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Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 10:48 CDT
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UGH! Stop with the cliffhangers. T_T Kurama's gonna go on a killing spree~ o.o I'm scared for everyone's life. Kurama's a psycho, run for your lives! This is awesome, keep up the great work. I love how you give everyone's thoughts and keep everything realistic (even if I could never pictures Kurama or Youko acting this way) New chapter soon, please please please!
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Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 15:24 CDT
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Wow. After reading this that's all I can think of. I would have never pictures Kurama like this, but at the same time it fits. No one can be that nice and caring without it being some sort of mask... Oh Gods, Hiei better be in time to save Yuusuke. I'm curious as to what will happen to Kurama, though... And to how you finish this. GET A MOVE ON!
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Reviewed By: T-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 11:14 CDT
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Though, i do not very much like Kurama I feel this is So not him...but I love the story anyway, because you put it together so impeccably, that it is hard not to enjoy it!
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: August 15, 2007 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story its so dark and orignal, its very detail
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Title: oooohhh please
Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish i could rate the enjoyment factor higher i do enjoy this fan fic so much. you still have me guessing as to who is going to die i love it. hope you up date soon. i am so exsited i think i am going to die
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, I just read all of the posted chapters and I have to say that even if your name wasn't listed by the story I would still be able to know who wrote it. Your use of detailed imagery and abilty to convey emotions with a few simple words as always been just a few of the reasons why I enjoy your stories so much. That and the fact that once you begin reading it's next to impossible to stop, even if the scenes depict simple conversations or extreme rape/torture. Your work is utterly captivating and I'm thankful for whatever or whomever it is that inspires you to write and post your stories.
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Title: HURRY
Reviewed By: Nutmeg On: August 15, 2007 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and write the next chapter! The tension is KILLING ME! BTW U ROCK!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 15:31 CDT
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FINALLY HIEI YOU CAME!! im soo happy right now i could cry. i just hope he's in time. update soon
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