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Reviewed By: loverofyaoi On: July 08, 2009 21:44 CDT Comment/Review: Oh Oh OH!!! Neville could be part of the triad...then he would have TWO sweethearts....and a threesome.
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Reviewed By: kawaii yashie On: February 04, 2008 15:56 CST Comment/Review: yummmy yaoi now please update i wish to read more
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 05:51 CST Comment/Review: LOVE IT! Hope to read more soon. This is definitely the most unique hp take Ive read yet.
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Reviewed By: Hell's Watcher On: September 27, 2007 18:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well......there goes the competetion ^_^
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Reviewed By: Karmegas On: September 27, 2007 09:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, this was a quick turn around. i'm hoping that this doesn't mean that you won't be updating for a year and a century now. And it's a good incentive that you spent the night working on it but don;t wear yourself out though. This fic is going remarkably well. My main complaint though is that the chapters are short but not as horribly so as some authors suffer me to but short nonetheless. Well, i do hope to see an update soon. L8r.
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Reviewed By: wicaofthesilvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 08:16 CDT Comment/Review: love the story
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Title: this i like Reviewed By: Karmegas On: July 05, 2007 09:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy reading this story. I hope you update soon and with at least two more chapters like you have done this time (i think). I hope all goes well for Har, Sev, Sir, Luc and Rem. and vol doesn't seem so bad, ne? But really your chapters are a bit short, not too short but not long either. it's an okay length but longer chapters would be nice too. but if shorter chapters like you are doing now help u to get out your updates faster then by all means continue. But do think about it.
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