| "Twisted Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: sb On: August 01, 2008 10:05 CDT
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Your fic made my night :) I was dead tired but I stayed until late night to finish reading every chapters. This fic is very enjoyable, especially the sexual tension between our lovely couple. Please continue :)
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Reviewed By: leila307 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story.. i hope you update soon.. you have a lot of imagination and you transfer that well into your stories.. keep up the good work.. and i'll be waiting (a long with many people.. i assume).. for your next chapter..
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: gwenivere22 On: July 24, 2008 14:50 CDT
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AMAZING! i had to fan myself off there a couple times. It got pretty heated up, excellent job! You conveyed the emotions spectacularly. I got goosebumps when he whispered in her ear. Update soon! I can't wait to read more!
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Three cheers for you! I have to say, that was an excellent chapter. This might be your second attempt at a lemon but you wrote it like a pro. The sexual tension in the beginning of the chapter was absolutely perfect! I don't think Ichigo was OOC at all and I also liked how you tied in the Renji/Yoruichi information swapping thing. It gives an element of danger as well as foreboding. I applaud you copiously and I hope you update very soon!
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Reviewed By: froglily13 On: June 04, 2008 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I wouldn't worry about the grammatical stuff cuz the story is great as far as I'm concerned, can't wait for the next chapter ;)
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Reviewed By: sharangurl On: May 18, 2008 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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THANK U! please update soon! this story has got me hooked i wonder how rukia is gonna react in the next chapter! >.<
great job!
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 03:08 CDT
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nclex...nursing?...havent rev'd yet but id say, that was a looong wait! update soon!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!! Im glad that you are back, I kinda missed this story! I hope you will update sooner since you exams are over *grins* Cant wait to see Rukia "handling" it...
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 10:05 CDT
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Oh my god the two poweful clans that are suppose to join is Shibas and Kuchikis Right? oh my god *throws a chair out of the window* you should update soon or else I might pass out from mere curiosity=) oh and you have to do somehting about that Ichigo and Rukia's "little" problem=D
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 19:58 CDT
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Finally! I was wondering when you were finally going to update. This is good stuff, witty and full of tingling suspense. Can't wait for the next chapter, and please don't wait too long!
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Reviewed By: Star Garden On: September 28, 2007 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story because of all the funny situations, and I like where this story is going. Even though I think it is only in its early stages as of yet, I can't wait untill the next chapter!!!! XDXDXD
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Title: Wow, only me?
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaaay more people should have reviewed. I really enjoyed these chapters because a) the sexual tension was amazing, b) the plot is developing nicely, and c) I think is is just so, I don't know the word... original--you've combined third person omniscient with first person singular in a way that really works. Some people who try the in-the-head/out-of-the-head can't get it quite right, but you do it very nicely. Continue with your work, I'm really looking forward to it. Also, good luck on your "big exam." ;)
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is going really well so far, it has real potential and I bet you can have a lot of fun with it. The story is original and intriguing and I am really looking forward to more. Only a few things, as I read, I felt like things were moving fast--I don't know if it is your style or the way you want things to be but it might help people to understand if it was a bit slower. Just a thought. I'll be waiting for your next chapter!!! Tituba.
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