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| "Vampires Feel Pain, Despite The Popular Belief" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: FKRS
Reviewed By: lionspride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right, well, to start off, I love the style of your writing. Though, having it all in a big block makes it a little tedious to read. Try putting a space between paragraphs for the sake of no more headaches. I'm anxious to know what's going to reveal itself as the plot unfolds, but it needs a plot first. Incase you didn't know, that's code for "Write more so I can figure it out" ... "please". ^-^
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter One: It sounds pretty good - the formatting is a bit odd though. You might want to check it. For mediaminer, it really helps if you double space between paragraphs. Otherwise, everything shows up a bit weird. And there check your italics, too. Otherwise, its wonderful!
| Title: boredom is bad
Reviewed By: Rayne's blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 14:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Out of boredom I decided to review my own story, I based the review on how fun it was to write and my general knowldege of things(just so you know, that doesn't expand too far lol.)Then,again, bored to tears I emailed myself about that same story. Yes, I know I have to be weird to do this stuff, especially since it requires talking to myself, but I'm strange even for an artist, so go figure.
| Reviewed By: Rayne's blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I highly enjoyed this creatively written story. I can't wait for you to complete it! I don't know much about grammar or writing styles so I rated you highly in those areas. Please, please, please write more!
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