| "I'll Die Before I Say, "I Love You"" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: anna balboa On: July 21, 2009 23:12 CDT
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continue this fic. it's great! i want to read more!!! please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: martianbunny On: April 06, 2008 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really a good fic. The grammar and spelling mistakes sometimes annoyed me but that was the only bad thing. I really really enjoyed it and I usually do not write comments.
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Title: Interesting Story...
Reviewed By: RaeBee-chan On: August 24, 2007 12:29 CDT
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I noticed that you put in characters from the show and that there is a correlation to certain characters. So, my question is simple: in the second chapter, are the Kan (I think that was their name) brothers related to Bui? They formed energy weapons, so I wondered. Anyway, this was brilliant, and while I could go on and on about the characters I noticed and the storyline, I just wanted to congratulate you on an intriguing and entertaining fanfic. By the way, I don't normally review fanfics, so just know that I really liked your story. I do hope you continue it either here or on AFF.net. Thanks so much! -Rae
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 21:44 CDT
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aweee kuro soo sad. When he finally found a girl he wanted to be with forever *tear*. The lemon was really good haha making kurama beg oooo hiei is evil. i can't wait 4 the sequel. I wonder what you have planned. i love hiei and youko. usually when i read hiei kurama its always hiei and kurama in his human form. I get annoyed cuz usually hiei only loves kurama not youko. how can u have one w/o the other!! i'm rambling soo yea bye for now!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: August 16, 2007 11:35 CDT
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How did i miss chappy 2? Hmm! Well, anyway, another 2 great chappies! Hiei and Yoko are so IC, it's great!This is the best Hiei Yoko I've read in a long time!! I loved the lemon! Update when poss!!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 21:46 CDT
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yea i understand about school i so don't wanna to go back. But anyway that was a amazing and sooo cute i love how hiei becomes all vunerable during sex. the little fox makes me laugh. Anyway update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sirona_Argante [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:39 CDT
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This is great so far! I like how Kurama is constantly teasing Hiei. XD Everybody seems to be in character, and all of the conversations between Yoko, Kurone, and Hiei are hilarious. I can't believe that Yoko lost the Pearl, though. >.< Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 14:59 CDT
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i like this story alot. Yay finally things are heating up with kurama and hiei! update soon sill goose forgot the pearl lol
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! XD its very very very interesting!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 15:26 CDT
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Oh wow! This is one of the best Hiei x Yoko fics I've read- no, scratch that, it is!! Your portrayal of their characters is spot on, and the banter between the two is hilarious! I hope you continue, and i can't wait for the next chappy!!! ^.^
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