| "Celebrity Is..." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Amet On: February 03, 2008 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yey!great ending. the ghost story was new but YA in the end was really love~ ^ ^ thanks for the update n sad that its the end. is there some new ones comin?
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 01:43 CST
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I love it! I'm happy for the happy ending! Too bad Omi was only mentioned once...
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Reviewed By: Amet On: August 15, 2007 04:13 CDT
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Thanks for the update~ I am very much anticipatin the next chap, it seems Ran's soul is still in the apartment? BTW Yohji's tantrum was good XD
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 11:54 CDT
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whew! i didn't expect that last turn, but oh this is so interesting. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Amet On: August 05, 2007 08:48 CDT
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wow~ you're fast to update, i was just randomly checkin and i was so happy when i saw urs n Yay for YA love finally. it was funny how youji was talkin about being in air but actually they were in air. :sigh: how i love this pair~ And also all of a sudden story takes supernatural turn. interesting twist in the story. lookin forward to ur nex update.
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Title: anticipating
Reviewed By: Amet On: August 03, 2007 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey! I love this chap. so far I wish Ran and Yohji would get 2gether already Dont know how Yohji can blame Ran seeing that as he was used too. I want to see wats gonna happen next. Ran resigned? :sniff: Hope he broke with that two-faced woman too! And to think dat Yohji and Ran relation was progressing, I need YxA fix soon! Will be waiting for ur update~
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew, a lot of developments! I love the fact, that just as happens too often in real life, sometimes events and emotions, good and bad, cascade until it becomes difficult to see your way clear. At least Ran now sees Lydia clearly, and Yohji and Ran have acknowledged their attraction. Both seem, however, to overlook the possibility of the third voice being Yohji's stalker. Poor Yohji, and Ran, have been through so much already. I eagerly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Required On: July 24, 2007 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea! Rite now I'm only waiting for Yoji and Ran to get together XD
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Reviewed By: av3 On: July 24, 2007 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh....that is such a lovely story... really I'm enjoying myself..... and you made a perfect start up with the first chapter, my eyes were pinned to the screen.....the following chapters too... so I hope you'll keep the chapters coming good luck
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that seems to resolve the relationship with Ken. If Yohji discovers Lydia's connection with Ran, the cumulative weight of betrayls will make it extremely difficult, if not impossible, to trust again. On the other hand, if Ran hears about Lydia's schemes, he should know to end his relationship with her. Then the mounting suspense concerning Yohji's stalker -- apparently not Lydia. I greatly look forward to mroe.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And so the plot thickens. I'm greatly enjoying this story, and eagerly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start with an original plotline and refreshingly different view of the characters. A few spelling errors of the type spellcheckers don't pick up (correctly spelled, sound alike words). I really look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: July 09, 2007 12:56 CDT
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great start, looking forward to more
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