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| "The Kitten and the Killer" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: cool
Reviewed By: mimiy9991 On: August 12, 2009 03:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i like your stroy so far and i am looking forward to the continuation. please continue!!!
| Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic and was wondering if it was going to be continued as it seems to last be updated in sep. 2007.
| Title: Katonie
Reviewed By: Katonie Surue On: August 27, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I love this story so far. I like the idea of Harry and Riddick together and I've only seen one other fic with the couple. Anyway, keep up the good workand, oh, I really like the way you've made Harry look, it's hot! Hugs & Kisses Katonie
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting story. Please update it again soon. And while you have great ideas, you need to work on your writing style. Please follow the advise of "show, do not say" it works very well for novels, and my own personal stories. Anyways, update soon, later.
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