| "The Irony of it All" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
Reviewed By: cherry1315 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
kewl :D, update soon :D
|
Reviewed By: Kuro-neko12 On: January 02, 2008 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing awesome. But you beed to fix your grammar. Like: Naruto says "Sasuke-teme" Baka has only one 'K' Many people make the mistake of writing Raman which is actually RamEn In the 5th chapter, you wrote past instead of passed. Seriously, learn how to wirte.
|
Reviewed By: DollFace [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 12:07 CST
Comment/Review:
please oh please put up a new chapter! sorry for pressureing you but i just cant wait!
|
Reviewed By: DollFace [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im your newest fan! this story is really soo awesome! please put up a new chapter soon! i cant wait.
|
Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
always getting better :)
|
Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
come on and put the next chapter up!!! I"M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! PLEASE UPDATE!!
|
Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: dororokun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! Make more Sooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
|
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! i thought you left the story unfinished! i was going crazy waiting for you to update! so many things left unanswered! keep it going!
|
Reviewed By: this is armybrat14 On: September 11, 2007 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hurry up and update!! we need ur story! i need ur story!! i'm like a druggy...or something...oh well! great!!
|
Title: WONDERFUL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is too KEWL for mediaminer!! Oh, please update soon! I want to know what happens with Rayne!! HURRY!!
|
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew! It was getting tense in that battle. I had my breath held until the end. I wish i was rayne right now. she's getting all the attention. But how will sasuke save rayne? and what's with her freaky two-faced friends? I can't wait for the next chpater. i'm begging to know what happens next! Whaaa! P.s. Great job!
|
Title: LadyAmazon
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad i could help. You make the begining of the chunin exams more funny. I want to make a perdiction...when the team is in the forest before or after orochimaru attacks...if he attacks Rayne ans sasuke will have a romantic cosmic moment. then sakura screams and naruto gets eaten by a snake. Now i really can't wait to see what you'll come up with!
|
Title: LadyAmazon
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! So the next chapter is the start of the chunin exams? that'll be awesome! can't wait!
|
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon On: July 21, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's getting got exciting that i couldn't breath! although if sasuke knew that something was wrong with her why didn't he say or do something? ya know, to hint that he has feelings her rayne? but it ios sweet that he showed some affection when he put her to bed. she's so lucky.
|
Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, i'vejust red the new chapter and now i'm on pins and needles becasue the battle on teh bridge part is coming up!!! plz get the next chapter up!!
|
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
