| "I love the cook, I mean to cook" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: spirit-warrior-wolf On: April 06, 2008 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello my name is spirit-warrior-wolf but call me Spirit for short. This fanfic was wonderful and i hope you will write more soon. i believe you have great creativity! Good luck and have a great day! *howls*
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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it was okay, but a lot of sentences were written kind of weird and it seemed like the chapter was rushed.. just remember, although everyone wants you to update, we'd rather you take your time to make the chapter good, instead of just there.. overall, it was a decent chapter.. but dont get me wrong, i still love your story to death ((and im working my brain to the max, but i still have NO CLUE whatsoever as to how you plan on getting kagome and inuyasha together.. every chapter just kills theyre chances piece by piece!! lol, i hope you know what youre doing!! XD))
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Reviewed By: lil6ter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 09:28 CDT
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Great job with the story so far! It took a while to read it all, but I'm back! (Told ya you couldn't escape me.) You have woven quite a little plot for yourself…again! (Someone is watching so many telenovela's) I like it a lot…but I wish that Kaggie would give up her excuse of getting engaged already, I mean…it's not like she is REALLY listening to what she is saying, and it is kinda getting' old in a way. Kinda feel sorry for Mioku too…*sniffle sniffle* Sango is still hung up on the ex. Great story and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 08:03 CDT
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Aw, poor Sango. Everything's getting messed up. Miroku's with Yuka, Hojo and Yura broke up, InuYasha's with Kikyo...but wait! Kagome needs attention...and where's Koga really going...? HAHA! This might work out after all. I think it was pretty mean what Miroku did to Sango, but I guess Miroku's the revenge type of guy in your fanfiction, ne? Anyways, keep up the good work! I wonder when the chaos will end...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 14:50 CDT
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this is great update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... seems that inuyasha lucked out since kikyo still wants to be with him... kagome seems to be lacking in attention with kouga... he doesn't spend time with her as much... miroku seems to be bouncing back... but sango seems to be suffering from all the mistakes she made... wonder how things turn out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MIROKU AND YURA!?! OMG WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!?!
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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! All these thoughts are going through my head now. Like 'What is Ayame going to speak to Inuyasha about?' Is it the "talk"? Lol. OMG, I just love this story! I sat here for house, just munching on junk food and reading this. Sounds retarded xDD But yeah! You're an awesome writer and all I gotta say is. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!PLEASE!!! =D!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job again!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: March 26, 2008 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you never wanna hear those words.... 'we need to talk' >.< anyways HA go Ayame.... lol ooo i cant wait to hear what Kikyo is going to say lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: March 26, 2008 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you never wanna hear those words.... 'we need to talk' >.< anyways HA go Ayame.... lol ooo i cant wait to hear what Kikyo is going to say lol
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 13:54 CDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next.l Your a great writer and keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nothing seems to be going right for anyone in sesshoumaru's restaurant lately... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 23:14 CDT
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loved it, like always, but i do wish you would make them a little longer.. but hey, its your story... ill be watching for that next update!!! happy writings!
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome again! I only hope to be as great as you by the time I'm twice your age! (Right now I'm way younger) I hope that made sence...
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