| "I love the cook, I mean to cook" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 00:28 CDT
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short, but i liked it.. and RAWR!! y are they BOTH comitted now?????!! i do believe i hated kikyo in the series ((nothing personal, or anything)) and i dont rele hate her in this, b/c its inuyashas fault.. ok, i completely lost my train of thought there, but i cant wait til inuyasha and kagome get together ((they will get together, right?!?)) or how you manage to get them together.. well, night (( or should i say good morning, lol, its about 1:30)) cant wait til you post the next chapter!!
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Title: Drama! Angst! Drama!
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, I love your story! It's so wrapped in angst and drama (which was my reasoning for the title). Koga's kinda got me suspicious, I'm really starting to think that he's cheating on Kagome and in that case...KAGOME CAN GO WITH INUYASHA!!!! Whoops, sorry, that kinda slipped out. ^^' Wow, Rin stood up to Kagura. I really like Kagura...but I have to be honest though, Rin's insult was a bit weak. Haha. I'm sad about what's going on with Sango and Miroku, they're my second favorite couple after all (after InuKag). :( I've been seeing some suggestions on other comments to lock Sango and Miroku in a freezer to talk out their problems, and I really like that idea. :) Kikyo...ugh...what a slut. Haha. She definitely sounds like a slutty corpse wrapped in pale skin to me (sorry Kikyo fans). I'm a little sad to see that Ayame and Koga are cousins, I really like KogAya but, hey, it is your story. :) Poor Hojo, now it's Yura's turn to be the slut. Haha. I feel really bad for Kagome too. I guess now she knows how InuYasha feels in the anime and manga. Haha (I know, I laugh too much). Anyway, keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next installment! ;D
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 17:14 CDT
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What is going through Kagome's mind? Does she love Inuyasha or Koga? Does she even know anymore or is her heart that undecided? What is up with Koga, ditching his cousin for a meeting? On sunday no less? I'd love to see more of him, but still love the whole Inu/Kag, Sessh/Rin bits. Really want to see Miroku and Sango getting back together, after what happened at the bar, I doubt that will happen, unless of course they get locked in the walk in fridge for a while. That would be hysterical, with only each other to keep warm. Looking forward to the next chapter. Later.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this chap it ws great!!! well can't wait to see what happenes next!!!! so UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 11:06 CDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting that kagome sang a song... and inuyasha & kagome talked finally... too bad kagome is still with kouga... kinda suspicious that isn't around much with kagome but only at home... liked how rin told off kagura... and feel bad for inuyasha about kagome... will something happen in the other relationships... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn i wish i was 100th lol anyways oooooo Ayame has step into action!! oooo Inuyasha and Kagome had a little moment :P
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man, that was a good chapter. I cant wait untill u update. I just hope when doesnt lose it.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG DRAMA IS EVERYWHERE!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i really liked this chap!! it was great!!! so UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!! I LOVE IT!!! and INuyasha singing would be hulariouse. i can picture it now. *hehe*
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 19:39 CDT
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Talk about SNAFU for all employees at their place. First Miroku and Sango on the outs because she still likes Inuyasha, Kagome finding out that Inuyasha is basically a player from Kohaku, and then Sesshomaru getting confronted by Kagura. This was a very exciting chapter for those who love a little drama in their life. Does Inuyasha really know what he wants with Kikyo? I agree with Kagome, she's just a cheap imitation of the real thing. As for Kagura, I thought that she was Sesshomaru's ex-wife. She's just going to cause a lot of trouble between Rin and Sesshomaru. As for Miroku and Sango... I can see the two of them being locked in the walk in freezer or pantry until they work out their 'issues.' I'm greatly enjoying this story, although somewhat confused as to what part, besides fiance that Koga plays in this. Is he really working at his job, or is he just playing Kagome? I'm rather surprised still that he let Kagome go to the club by herself dressed as she was. Thanks for the update, as I eagerly await the fallout of the couples involved. Thanks again.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... story is coming along fine... lots of drama and intrigue... well everything and everyone seems to be in chaos... the people and relationships are all messed up... things have just gotten really complicated... wonder how things will work out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 22:38 CDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon i can't wait to see what happens :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang man dats harsh .....keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 00:12 CST
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Thanks for the update. I really love the whole cooking aspect of this story, as well as the intrigue that ensues due to the coworkers and their 'titles.' Poor Kagome, 1st she thinks that she knows Inuyasha, then he changes, now he's asking her if she likes Kikyo, who is a Kagome clone except like a corpse wrapped in skin. Talk about messing with someone's mind Inuyasha. What the heck is up with Sango? Does she love Miroku, or is she just stringing him along because she's still in love with Inuyasha? Poor Miroku... he's caught up in all the drama that is Inuyasha. I'm thinking after his little slip of the fist that he'll be on the unemployment in the morning. What is Koga's deal? If he loves Kagome, as much as he claims that he does, he'd indulge her on occasion, despite his dislike of the club scene and go with her... to protect her from predators like Inuyasha and Miroku if nothing else... especially the way you described her outfit. I don't see Kagome and Koga being together by the end of this story... but I could be wrong. Thank you again for your update. I look forward to more of your writings.
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