| "I want you..." Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kairen On: January 04, 2010 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it at the beginning, but I felt there could have been more. Also, I think you rushed into a lot of stuff too quick. Needs more detail, more feeling. Not bad though, I still liked it. Zero/Yuuki is my fav pairing. Thanks for a good read, keep at it!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl (not signed in) On: May 03, 2009 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute and fluffy. Do some more! I love this pairing.
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Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol pancake said everything i was thinking of as i was reading cause im a grammar freak lol but its not as a bad thing cause this is a really good story! i liked it! i hope you see pancakes review as a review and not as that person trying to insult you cause i know what an insulting review is [trust me] but thank you so much for taking the time to write this~! ^__^ it was really good ♥!~
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Title: Enjoyable
Reviewed By: Kawaii Nai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. I like how Zero pulled back but then when he saw Yuki's distress and felt that it was not pitty but that she truly loved him. It was very faithful to his character. Thank you. (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!!!!! please tell me you are going to write more Zero/Yuuki fics. Please write more! Your style was wonderful and the story flowed perfectly. You even captured the characters. please say you will write more, please.
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Reviewed By: krazytrini91 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 17:36 CST
Comment/Review:
this is such a great fanfic!!! it really is! :) are there more?
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Reviewed By: Pancake On: December 29, 2007 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay..wel the fic was ok but i feel like you could still write a better fic...try to be more desriptive...use a thesaurus if you have to btw its Kurosu not Koruso okay? or you could go with Cross what ever floats your boat ok?
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Title: Luff!
Reviewed By: Xena12543 On: August 06, 2007 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be one of the best VK fanfic's ever. It was absolutely adorable I must say. Thanks for it...I did enjoy immensely.
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Title: nice...
Reviewed By: lara_101_chick_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one shot-er. you need to write tons of full-length fics. But i know thos can be a pain from personal experience. ive got one from like, two yaers ago thats only got two chapters. haha. good job.
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