| "The Curse: One of Life and One of Death" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 22:15 CST
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ahhhhh i read it over for the 2nd time ^-^ lol and i stil love it!
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Reviewed By: Bara-Dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ye gods, that was a hilarious ending! A friend told me about this story and I'm glad they did because I loved it. I didn't like that Maliki had to die T.T. Well, anyway, I would suggest putting in that Sesshy and Kags had to have a LOT of boys before they got a total of 5 girls lol. Yes, I am a demented pervert freak. Welp, anyway, time to go ssit in the corner muttering about zombies. Bye!
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 21:51 CDT
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ahhhhhhh...the end....*sniff*....that was really really good.....hmmm ideas.....well somthin needs to be done about the trust thing with kags sister and father......you could kill them but that wouldnt be fair to inuyasha.....ohhhh i know you could kill him too and solve that problem make kikyo make him bad or somthin......lets see....sess and kags deff need to become mates....and thats all i got....not very helpful but....i dunno thats what i would do
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Title: MAN I WISH MY LIFE WAS THAT INTERESTING....XD
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Know even though everything worked out all right I'm still sad tha Kagome can't trust her father and that she isn't friends with Kikyo because it was starting to seem like they were going to have a real sisterly relationship befor they both awakened....what a pitty....sniff*.....well at least your making a sequal I'm going to get to know how things worked out for them after all...XD.....K get started on that second part now..........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 18:38 CDT
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OMG!!!!! I HAVE IDEAS!!!!! 1)gome and sess kill onigomo with a nightmare!! that would be soo cool like they enter his dream and kill him like Freddy cougar. 2) ANOTHER YEAR AT HIGH SCHOOL!!!!!!! WITH SOME DRAMA AND KAGS/SESS KIK/INU ARE POPULAR BEYOND BELIEVE CUZ EVERY1 HERD ABOUT THEM!!!!!!!!!!!! 3) kags gets a pet and everytime she says a line te pet attacks (but for play) (im acting like a little school girl)(LOL!!!) 4) graduation!!!!!!! 5) mating!!!!! 6) wedding planning 7) AND PUPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!! well thats all my ideas so far um please make a new story soon :) ( i have a question did onigomo die from the spirit thing kags gave him? if not make him die in his dreams!!!:) lol!!!!!!!!)
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Title: HURAY! FOR THE DEATH OF ONIGUMO
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm worried about Kagome...poison Isn't something to play around with.....*sob* and the way she was talking was like she was dieing.....that is bad....and didn't Kagome's grandpa get told by Midoriko that is would be very bad if Kikyo absorbed Kagome's power....that is terrible....I realy hope you can update befor next week its just to sad that she might die......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 15:20 CDT
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! you must write more and its ok you didn't write for along time only thing matters is that you got the chapters though lol well update when you can i dont mind when you do as long you do it!!!!!! im defently in love with this story!!!! know what will be cool??!?!? when kags awakens the angel fully the whole nine yards she kills onigomo instently and she dousn't die!!!!!!!! well that was unexpeted and obvious ending don't listen to me im not worthy!!!!!! just update when you can i'll be waiting!!!!
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Title: Awaiting the next chapter
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 17:22 CDT
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Ok my brain is tring to work now so bare with me....Sesshoumaru wont gain his transformation untill another hour.....and that is how he appeared in the dream how can he wait for an hour to save Kagome...she is in the position that she was in the dream but what of Sesshoumaru this just doesn't make sence. Onigumo isn't going to get to have his way with her is he....he sure could do alot in an hour (look of worrie on my face)......AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....you have to update soon I'm realy scard and I think I'm might slipe even more in to maddness ...(what my whole family is crazy ...but this might instatutionalize me...hehe).....O please please please up date soon.....Nyuka...(p.s. I was wandering what did Kagome's Grampa's sheld do??)
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 09:23 CDT
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MUST read more must read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: eeeee.....
Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh cliffy nooooooo....that was evil pure evil......please update soon......this is really comming along well.....i cant wait to read what happens
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:48 CDT
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please update soon i beg you i beg you!!!!!! i really need you to write more im beyond hooked now and you left a cliffy makeing me like AHHHHHHHHH!!!! must read more!!!!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story not much of a one shot though...hehe.....I'm a sucker for a good story and yes I consitder this a good story....that is kinda mean to leave it like that though Kagome is sitle not safe.....I wand if Inuyasha's dad ready didn't mind dieing so he could be with his love in heaven.....kinda sucks that Kagome won't be able to ever defete him in a battle....I guess she is going to be and the inu manner for a long time....hehe....welllllllll hoping you update soon from your news reader....Nyuka
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