Reviewed By: masamune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, damn sexy and I love the kink. The comedy with the old woman is good. The only problems are grammar, presentation (line breaks, spacing) and ... well that's all... I enjoyed it very much!
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