| "twisted lives" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 17:38 CST
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i think that this is a good story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 14:41 CDT
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this is a good story so far, please update it soon.
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Reviewed By: ladydv011 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 17:29 CST
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update soon
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 11:55 CDT
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personaly i dont think your story sucks, update when your ready.....hopefully soon
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 14:55 CDT
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really good please up date soon i may have reviewed this al ready but i dont remember
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good please up date sooon
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it made. update soon
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update again soon, your story rocks!! can't wait to see what happens!!
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Reviewed By: Bataratgirl On: August 12, 2007 22:39 CDT
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i want to see what will happen. I was a little shocked with the bad Inu-Kag vibe but it is ok. I can't realy tell you or bad at this point but you have my intress
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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interesting fic so far, nice plot but its pretty fast paced. if you don't mind me giving out some constructive criticism; concentrate on details a bit more. everything seems a bit rushed. though i would like to read on, please update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Hime Jun Hi On: August 06, 2007 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz tell me that you'll continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 22:45 CDT
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love the new chapter can't wait till u write some more
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 05:33 CDT
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AHHH!! I loved it! Please update soon! please let her be paired with Hiei!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 10:53 CDT
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Great work! It rocked! Keep it up and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser30 On: August 03, 2007 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I love it so far. Try to make the characters a little less out of character please. Other than that...great work. I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Twisted Lives
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 08:11 CDT
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I can't wait for Inu-Yasha's reactions to "Dickhead and Dickhead's friends" when they join! This is going to be good!! This is funny too and I agree with the boys ... Kagome is scary. PLEASE update a.s.a.p!!!
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Reviewed By: UnknownReader On: August 02, 2007 06:35 CDT
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Looks good so far
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Reviewed By: Mistress Dementra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 07:14 CDT
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Plz update soon
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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up date soon!!! whats the pairing?! lemons? ja ne!!
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Title: OMG!! This is GREAT!!!!
Reviewed By: Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I hope that you write more soon. It would totally make my day! You are SO going on my fav. authors list.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! AND SOON THANKS
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Reviewed By: miko_onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 23:31 CDT
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wow it rele has some potential plz continue as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 16:39 CDT
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Great work! I loved it. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: shippofan49_not login_ On: July 15, 2007 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love your story so far can you please keep up the good work.
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Title: Twisted Lives
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 11:26 CDT
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Wow. This is good, so far. What's the pairing? Please update a.s.a.p! Yusuke is going to freak when she found out she has a son ... even though he's adopted. But he don't know that until Yusuke makes a scene, right? Lolz. Please update a.s.a.p.
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