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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ it was so cute! I am very much in love with Fake and especially JJ. Poor Dee is going to be sooo heartbroken now that JJ isn't going to be glompiong him every five seconds! lol. A few grammar and punctuation mistakes, but overall not bad!
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Title: Punctuation, mostly.
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nee, nee. It's all really good, but it's mostly the punctuation that threw me. Drake's--not Drakes. that's-- not thats. Little stuff like that. Don't be mad!!!! -Kita (wuvs you very much)
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Dax!!! Just wanted to let you know that this is a great story and we'd both love it very much if you would write more. (Ooh, that was so cute!!!!! Sorry for the low spelling grade, but well, there were some errors that kind of slapped me. If you need a Beta, let me know!!!! Kita *cuddles rabid fangirl* M-wah, love you!!!)
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so stunning! Great situation you exploited! I'm writing the next chapter now. Please continue to write more! I saw a few sentence structure errors, but they don't break down the story. Great work!
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