| "Betrayed Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Lyons On: February 23, 2009 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
really cute please update, and Kagome/Kouga all the way!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter update... it's really hard for kagome now because she still has feelings for inuyasha... maybe with kouga around she'll be distracted from thinking about inuyasha & kikyo... kouga/kagome pairing is ok with me too... kagome & inuyasha being friends while paired with kouga will be intresting... update a couple of days after you get back from your break... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: nith On: July 27, 2007 17:19 CDT
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wow...i still think Inuyasha should go with Kagome more than Kikyo...actually to be frank i think Kikyo is dumb..her character..i dunno..i just dont like her i guess
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Reviewed By: red dragon 2007 On: July 27, 2007 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww come on! enough with inu/kags stories (and fyi the manga shows/tells that even though the clay pot died, inu is still wanting to have gone with the stupid priestess!!!) soooo lets have a kagome/koga story instead (he's more sensitive to kagome (yeah the ongoing manga chapters reveal that too!
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Reviewed By: meghannnn On: July 26, 2007 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: twistedsister On: July 26, 2007 22:44 CDT
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I do want this to ne Inu/Kag because I do not want Kikyo to get her way, and I hope Inuyasha goes through alot of pain before Kagome takes him back.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... kikyo is becoming a nuisance... she's acting like a child... hope inuyasha just wakes up and leaves the past behind... hope kagome just stays strong... would like the pairing to be inuyasha/kagome but a sesshomaru/kagome would be nice too... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Apprentice On: July 26, 2007 19:00 CDT
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This is very intense, and i like the romantic thoughts you have in your head. I would like to hear more! Please update, this is an amazing story like your other. There are strong feelings in this story and its..what can i say...its just beautfully written.
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 00:07 CDT
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i love it.i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it PLZPLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ write more
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Reviewed By: skyivvsoifdlasdj On: July 25, 2007 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice! please keep writing. i hope kagome gets back at inuyasha and gets together with koga or somethingg haha
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Reviewed By: . On: July 25, 2007 21:53 CDT
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good story so far i don't think you should make it a inu/kag story though thats just like all the other stories out there personally i think is a really good start for a koga/kag story but sess/kag would work too (: but thats just my opinion ^^; lol
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 21:13 CDT
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nice chapter update... hope that kagome will be strong and stands up for herself... hope inuyasha grows up and realizes who her really loves... hope kikyo just rest in peace... update soon... don't forget the pairing... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:29 CDT
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interesting story... what will the pairing be?... inu/kag or kouga/kagome or sess/kag... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:27 CDT
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is this a kag/inu story or a koga/kags story; and i love it so far ;pour kagome :(
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