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| "Lost in the Sea of Serenity: An Altered Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Potential
Reviewed By: Moonlight Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 03:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has potentail, but you do need to work on your spacing a little bit. It will make it easier for the eye to track. Apart from that, I look forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: lionspaw2182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story. If I might make a couple of suggestions for easier reading... 1) Go to regular black font and a bigger size. It's easier to read if it's black on white. 2) Put double spaces between paragraphs since the tab formatting gets taken off. I enjoyed the first little bit of this story and hope to see more later.
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