| "Kyubi Defeated: A new begining" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: litron08 On: May 27, 2009 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible I enjoyed it completely and thank you for completing this amazing story
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it but in the info notes i found one mistake temari is not a friend of garra she is garras sister but other than that I love it //NHL
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: THE_WRITER_OF_CROW. On: August 23, 2007 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhhhh sorry about earlier comment i was on a diff computer and it wouldent pull up the new story =P
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: THE_WRITER_OF_CROW On: August 20, 2007 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it seems to me there should have been a fight between the shadekage and naruto p.s great story
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 18:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Huh. Good story. You do have some cool ideas, and even have an awesome storyline to present all of em. Unfortunately, you REALLY need to work on your writing style. If you did that, you'd have one of the better stories out there. So, to improve that, I have two suggestions. First, write the chapter, and then edit the hell out of it. Even the best writers go through at least 4 drafts before they send it to their personally editor prior to publishing. And second, follow the one rule of prose, "show, do not tell." If you follow that, your story will be longer, and a bigger pain in the ass to write. But no one will be able to dispute the quality of the tale you present. So, keep that in mind. Beyond those few points, this story isn't half bad. And you can always go back and repost the chapters, heavily edited of course. Well, that's all I have to say, so, later.
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Reviewed By: andromedar On: August 02, 2007 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic!!!! ooooohhhhh update soon please! I want to know how Naruto works with the seven. Oh my God this was a great chapter. I enjoyed this chapter more than the others, though the others were also magnificient. Thanks for writing such an excellent fic. tata
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Reviewed By: Train1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo...I've read your fic in one rush...let me say something about it: SIMPLY GREAT!!!! Yeah you read right...i can't blive you got just one review...ok, my english isn't the best but i want you to know how much I like your story... Come up with the next chapter soon...I'm waiting for it...
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