| "Daughter of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: link1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 07:02 CDT
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Wow! That was a pretty cool story. Never seen one quite like that. I like the whole saiyan idea as in vegeta-sei. I hope you continue cause I think it could turn into somethin really worthwhile. So yeah, GREAT STORY, hope to see a update soon. SEE YA!
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Title: Escape/Chap4
Reviewed By: hey_yo_225@yahoo On: August 12, 2007 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was unexpected. I wasn't expecting Piccolo to do what he did. Bardock is still alive?! I wonder what role he plays in the story. I'm happy for Gohan, so I like this chapter alot more because of it. Please continue!
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Title: Unexpected Occurances/Chap3
Reviewed By: hey_yo_225@yahoo On: August 11, 2007 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just like the title says, this was full of surprises. So Bulma was just Veggie's conbubine, or even something less than that. It certainly fits with the story. I wonder why Kakarot is mad at Raditz, and the whole Eighteen thing was great. Your descriptions of Krillin were right on the money. I can't wait for the big showdown: Gohan vs Trunks. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Wolfishbones [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 20:52 CDT
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At the moment Vegeta is the prince and Kakarot has no idea about Gohan yet! Thank you so much for reviewing, I almost took this down. I'm really glad you like it. You brought my hope back! :D
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Title: Pleasurable Pain/Chap2
Reviewed By: hey_yo_225@yahoo On: July 20, 2007 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. I wasn't expecting to see Krillin at all, and now he's teamed up with Kakarot. I'm happy about that. As for Gohan, well, does Kakarot even know about Gohan and his situation? I feel really sorry for him. I hope he gets rescued/freed soon so he can meet Videl. But I know it won't be that easy, right? And I have a question: Since Trunks is in the story, is he the prince, or is it still Vegeta? Update soon PLEASE!!
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Title: Introduction
Reviewed By: hey_yo_225@yahoo On: July 20, 2007 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that was a great introduction. The opening was very interesting and it draws me in to read more cuz I want to understand it. So what exactly is Kakarot running away for? I'm on to the next chapter now to find out. This has the makings for a great story.
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