| "A Heart Can Only Take So Much" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: hi
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 14:09 CST
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i love your story. i would love to read more
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Title: Sango?
Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 20:52 CST
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Unbeknownst to her in the nearby shrubbery a certain hanyou was watching, hearing every one of her innermost thoughts. Sango O.o ??? Did you mean to put that bit there???
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 04:44 CST
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god man that rocks! i loved it. update quickly. and did i mention i hate you. why did you have to make it a cliffhanger
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Reviewed By: inukaite123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 11:39 CST
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I really enjoy your story! very well written please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is starting to get depressed... interesting that inuyasha was listening to kagome talk to kirara... what will inuyasha do now... what will kagome do?... hope can miroku & sango help... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: DarkNotEvil199 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's confusing. I don't understand why Sango would blame Inuyasha in the first place...but really it is good
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... feel bad for kagome... inuyasha should do something before anything else that's bad happens... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! I really enjoy your style of writing, and the way you throw some form of humor into all this. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Poor Inu and Kags...such angst! Please update soon, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 18:21 CST
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Another great chapter, and the tension increases. But a ? Did we miss something? The last word in the chapter is a new sentence starting with Sango. Was it a typo, and not supposed to be there, or was there more, and it didn't show up? Just checking, don't want to miss anything!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 02:31 CDT
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Very well done. Love the 'feel' of your writing. Characterization is perfect. This has promise!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 15:17 CDT
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interesting story... like the start... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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