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 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2003 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta and ssjprincess: *narrowed eyes, crossed arms, and tapping foot*
Vegeta: Where the hell is she?
ssjprincess: Good question.... where are you Kat?
Vegeta: You one to be asking that question after being gone for awhile.
ssjprincess: Well, I was without a computer for a few weeks, because mine decided to blow up-
Vegeta: *frowns* Without any help from me.
ssjprincess: I know, I know, did I say you did it?
Vegeta: *rolls eyes* On more than one occassion.
ssjprincess: Anyway, *motions for Vegeta to be quiet* we are getting off the point.
Vegeta: O_o You did *not* just motion *me* to shut up.
ssjprincess: *sigh* Fine, don't, let's just get back to the point.
Vegeta: And that would be *smirk* me?
ssjprincess: *face drop* Ah, no. The point being, 'Where the hell is Kat?'.
Vegeta: *shrugs* How should I know?
ssjprincess: -_-; *releases a frustrated sigh* I feel like I'm talking to Kakkarott.
Vegeta: *a look of revulsion* Take that back!
ssjprincess: *pinches the bridge of her nose while sighing loudly* Anyway, Kat, where are you? Are you still here? I miss you. I want an update.
Vegeta: I said take that back, Onna!
ssjprincess: I'm ending this now before Vegeta blows up.
Vegeta: I'll show *you* who's blowing up!
ssjprincess: Eek!
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2002 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Sorry it took so long for me to check out your updates. I blame *points at Vegeta* him./
Vegeta: *rolls his eyes*
ssjprincess: Well, it IS your fault.
Vegeta: I don't know why I'm asking this, but exactly how is it my fault?
ssjprincess: Because you have inspired me lately-
Vegeta: I inspire everyone.
ssjprincess: Sheesh. *rolls her eyes* Anyway, as I was saying, you've inspired me. I have four new story ideas. I just have to decide which one I want to do first. :)
Vegeta: O_O; Oh for the love of Dende, no! I don't want to know!
ssjprincess: Vegeta, I'd behave if I were you. I'd hate to have to write a yaoi, with you and *dun dun dun* Yajirobe.
Vegeta: O_O!!!!!!!!!!!! *eye begins to twitch as a look of utter horror covers his ashen face*
ssjprincess: Vegeta? Youi okay?
Vegeta: *other eye twitches* *looks at ssjprincess incredulously* Am I okay? AM I OKAY?!! No! Damnit, Onna that isn't even funny to talk about!
ssjprincess: I'm sorry. I won't do it again. Why don't we start this review and forget all about it.
Vegeta: Fine, let's start this review, but I don't know if I can forget about *shudders* that.
ssjprincess: Hey Kat, do you think I have the attitude to be in your fic? :)
Vegeta: *looks at Kat* Yeah, put her in it.
ssjprincess: *smiles* Thanks for your vote, Vegeta.
ssjprincess: *smirks* And give her Nappa.
ssjprincess: O_O! *shaking her head rapidly* No! I take it back. Vegeta, you don't have a vote.
Vegeta: *chuckles*
ssjprincess: *glares at Vegeta* You are so annoying sometimes.
Vegeta: *raises an eyebrow* You didn't find me annoying last night-
ssjprincess: Vegeta! I'm ignoring you. *turns to Kat* Really though, if you want to add me I'd be honored. :) What's my attitude like? Do I really need to answer that? lol
Vegeta: I'll answer it, she's a b-
ssjprincess: *glares in Vegeta's direction* It's a good thing I KNOW you don't really mean that. I'm really quite sensitive you know, I just am afraid to let that side of me show... to easy to get hurt that way. *sigh*
Vegeta: Shall I start playing the violin now?
ssjprincess: *sticks her tongue out at Vegeta* I also like jokes and humor, if you couldn't tell. :)
Vegeta: Trust me... we couldn't.
ssjprincess: *doesn't even look in Vegeta's direction. Just puts her hand up, palm facing him* I'm ignoring you.
Vegeta: *chuckles*
ssjprincess: Let's see what else did you ask for, of yeah hair color. I'm a blonde.
Vegeta: *sarcastically* I'd have never guessed.
ssjprincess: *mutters* I wish he came with a mute button. Though you can make it any color you want, I don't mind. If you need anything else just email me. :) Now on to the chapter review...
Vegeta: O_O! What? We are just now getting to the actual review?
ssjprincess: Yep.
Vegeta: *smirks* I thought you wasn't talking to me.
ssjprincess: -_-; Doh!I forgot. Anyway, the review...
So, Zarbon and Josh are going to race. *gasp* Zarbon just disrespected Josh by ignoring his outstretched hand.
Vegeta: You expected any less from Zarbon?
ssjprincess: No.... not really. But you know what Vegeta, I can see you doing that too.
Vegeta: *crosses his arms and smirks*
ssjprincess: *smiles* Look who it is... *sighs* Seventeen. *winks at Seventeen* You can ride with me anytime.
Vegeta: Onna, you are making a spectacle of yourself!
ssjprincess: *shrugs indifferently* So? anyway, back to the review... I was laughing at the scared for his life Turles.lol
Vegeta: *looks disgustedly at Turles* Wuss.
ssjprincess: Hmmmm... interesting. Nappa and Radditz are police officers. *hold up a finger* Hold on a sec. *insert hentai thoughts about Radditz here* *shakes her head* Okay, I'm done. lol
Vegeta: *rolls his eyes*
ssjprincess: Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I wonder who's going to win the race? Probably Zarbon. That way we can just hate him more. :) But I could be wrong usually am. lol
Great job on this chapter Kat. I'm SO happy you *finally* updated it. :P *turns to Vegeta* Feeling better?
Vegeta: A little, but that was just wrong, Onna. Geez, how would you like the image of a naked Yajirobe stuck in your mind?!
ssjprincess: Ewwww.... *tilts her head and gasps* Oh Dende! Help me!
Vegeta: What?
ssjprincess: Now the image is stuck in my head! *lays down on the floor getting in the fetal postion pulling her knees to her chest and whimpering like a baby* No... Yajirobe.....
Vegeta: Serves her right.

*ahem* Sorry for this *long* review* I'll stop now..... I think I had to much coffee tonight. *grins sheepishly* *waves bye*
~**Tonya**~ aka ~**ssjprincess**~
 Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2002 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A little too short. OK I will make my review short ya know I just got my report card and erm didn't get to good of grades so I might just start cursing and stuff, but just to let ya know I love it so far! ^_~
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2002 13:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
ssjprincess: *snickers mischieviously while eyeing Seventeen*
Seventeen: Oh *bleep*!
ssjprincess: Oh, the things I can teach you! *smirks*
Vegeta: O_o; Onna? What about me?! *powers up* I'll blast this weak no-account to hell!
Seventeen: O_O! What the *bleep* did I do?
ssjprincess: *smirks at Seventeen* Such profanity! *snickers* Remind me to punish you....later. *turns back to Vegeta* Woah there, Monkey Prince. No need to blast anyone. I don't like Seventeen more than you! How could you even think such a thing?
Vegeta: *powers down* I knew you would see reason, Onna.
ssjprincess: *smirks* Of course. *looks at Kat and winks* I just want to *play* with him for awhile.
Vegeta: What?!
ssjprincess: Don't worry, air's fair. You get to play to! *gives Vegeta a shove towards Kat, then grabs Seventeen's hand and runs*
Seventeen: Don't I get a say in this?!
ssjprincess: Ummmmm...let me think about that... no. *yells towards Vegeta and Kat* Have fun! I'll be back to pick you up later. Oh, and don't do anything I wouldn't do!
Vegeta: *mutters* That a short list, Onna. *looks at Kat then smirks* So..... what kind of game did you have in mind?
 Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2002 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a verey good story so far. i can't wait to see were this is going
 Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter  On: September 19, 2002 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
For ssjprincess, of course you can have seventeen, just so long as i can borrow Vegeta for a while...i have this new game i want to teach him.
 Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2002 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
OHH! Very neat! Very... gangsterish?
I dont hope you write more to this fic. The beginng is really really good. I'd love to read some more when you post it.

Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 27, 2002 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there! *looks around* Just checking for an update. *ahem* You do realize you haven't updated this for awhile right?
Vegeta: I think she knows when and when she does not update, Onna.
ssjprincess: Well, consider this an official kick in the rear, Kat. :P I want an update. :) I also noticed you have a couple of new things up that I haven't read, so I'll have to do that. :) Oh well, I just wanted to say hi, so.... Hi! :)
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2002 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi!! *eyes get big and fill with tears as she bites bottom lip* Awwww!!! *hugs Chibi-Dacra* Thank you, for saying I'm your favorite reviewer. *slips Chibi-Dacra two sackfuls of chocolate goodness*
Vegeta: O.o Onna? Are you bribing the brat with candy?
ssjprincess: Of course not. *whispers to Vegeta* It makes the boy hyper before bedtime and makes it harder to put him to bed. *chuckles and looks at Kat* I'm not the babysitter. :P lol
Vegeta: I think she should leav the brat with a sugar rush with you for awhile. *smirks* It would serve you right for all the candy you give him.
ssjprincess: *smirks back at Vegeta* That's fine. He can play in your training room. *chuckles*
Vegeta: O.O!! NO!
ssjprincess: *smiles* Anyway on with the review...
Vegeta: *grumbles*
ssjprincess: I like how Kathi stood up to Zarbon and does not back down from his obnoxious behavior and bullying. Just kick him in the-
Vegeta: *with his hand over ssjprincess' mouth* Onna, watch *where* you instruct other females to kick males. That is a very delicate and painful wound. *shivers*
ssjprincess: Mpph mmphh Mmpphh.
Vegeta: *smirks* I like it better this way.
ssjprincess: *glares at Vegeta*
Vegeta: *chuckles and removes his hand from over ssjprincess' mouth*
ssjprincess: Geez, Vegeta. It's just Zarbon.
Vegeta: Oh, that's right. *shrugs* Instruct away.
ssjprincess: *rolls her eyes* Back to the review... *grabs Seventeen* He's so cute. Are you sure I can't have him?
Vegeta: Onna, put him down.
ssjprincess: No, I want him!
Vegeta: Now!
ssjprincess: *snuggles Seventeen* No, he's mine now. :P
Vegeta: *growls*
Seventeen: O.O
ssjprincess: *lets go of Seventeen* Fine. *whispers to Seventeen and hands him a piece of paper* *directions to my closet*
Seventeen: Closet?
ssjprincess: Don't worry, it's big, and you'll have people to talk to there. Trust me. *smirks*
*pats seventeen on his rear* Get on your way.
Vegeta: *powers up*
ssjprincess: *looks at Seventeen* I'd run if I were you. *chuckles*
seventeen: O.O *runs*
Vegeta: *crosses his arms and scowls* You enjoy causing trouble, don't you, Onna?
ssjprincess: *laughs* Yep. *looks at Kathi* Is this review long enough? lol Back to the review and my secret want of Seventeen.
Vegeta: Not so secret! *growls*
ssjprincess: Josh seems like a nice addition to the story. He must be there to stick up for Kat and to make Zarbon pay for his early ghastly actions. I can't wait to see where you take this next! I want to honestly say I really am enjoying this fic. :) Oh, one more thing. *pushes a keyboard at Kat* Get to writting, girl1 I want a new chapter soon, or, or, or, I'm stealing Goku! :P
Goku: *squeak*
 Reviewed By: Dark Princess  On: June 21, 2002 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
i must aggre with ssjprincess. i two find this prologue intersting.

~*~Dark Princess~*~
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2002 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there! I see you have posted a new story. It was an intersting prologue. :) I'm guessing that the person that was telling the story was Vegeta? I think.... I guess it could be Kakarott, but he doesn't have the attitude. So, I'll stick with Vegeta. :) Zarbon seems like he is a real jerk in this fic.
Vegeta: Onna.
ssjprincess: What?
Vegeta: Duh! Zarbon is a jerk.
ssjprincess: Point taken. Anyhow, I'm curious as to the direction this story takes. So.... where's the next chapter?
 Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2002 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there! I really enjoyed this new chapter. I liked the interaction between Krillen and Eighteen. Her anger completely dissolved once she realized those panties were for her. :)
As for Goku and Chichi, she yells at him to much. *grabs Goku and gives him a wink* I think I'll take him and show how to be treated.
Goku: *smiles naively* That sounds fun!
ssjprincess: *winks* Oh it will be.
Vegeta: Onna!! Get away from Kakarott!
ssjprincess: Fine! *whispers to Goku as he's walking away* Don't go to far. *chuckles*
Vegeta: *growls*
ssjprincess: I was joking! *winks at Seventeen and Radditz* Now those I wouldn't mind either. *chuckles*
Vegeta: *powering up*
ssjprincess: *chuckles* Oh calm down. You know your the one. But in this fic, your taken, so you can't blame a girl for checking out her options. *winks at Turles*
Vegeta: Yes, I can!
ssjprincess: *chuckles* Anyhow, I know I was rambling again, but I just want you to know I really like this fic. Get the next chapter up soon!

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