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| "Fragments of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: jinnandtonic23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed both of your stories! I loved the twist with Bee becoming human. Good work! Your grammar and spelling do need work, so maybe you could get a beta to read over your next chapters? Possibly, you could improve the flow of your dialogue. However, it's fun to read, so keep it up!
| Reviewed By: the_Pheonix_Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!! I love both of your transformer stories. i think your characters are very well thought out and the plots are excellent. (i really thought bumblebee was going to turn her into a robot) I can't wait for the next chapters to come out. My only regret is i won't have internet for most of next week, so may be going to the library alot! lol!!!! Thank you for a wonderful adventure! P.S. Smutty version, yeah!!! :P
| Reviewed By: the_Pheonix_Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is great. i cant wait to find out what happens next! i hope the next chapter is up soon!
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