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Reviewed By: kags12 On: February 10, 2009 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, but you need to write longer chapters. Update soon please. Oh and if you even think of deleting this story I swear to kami I will haunt you in your dreams.
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Reviewed By: kags13 On: November 07, 2008 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You totally need to write more and make the chapters longer. I love your stories, Inuyasha and Kagome pairings are awesome. So update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please or I will haunt you in your dreams literally.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Sango_InuYasha_shashomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsom story but you need longer capters update soon.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, now the story line is okay, but may I suggest a reviser? Ya know, someone who u can send ur stories too and have them tell u what They think u should change... also, when u say 'With Inuyasha' or 'With Sesshomaru' you are really just making the paragraphs boring (for me anyway). However, if u do use this method of changing the scene, then I would suggest describing the scene more, and also describing characters with more paragraphs, and not just coming out and saying what they look like... I'm totally not trying to be mean, But if u wanna I could help ya, I'd be happy too. I want u too know that even though I wrote this I think that your a great author, and remember, no one's prefect. Email me if u think I could help!
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Reviewed By: fairygirl13 On: July 15, 2008 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write more. You also need to write longer chapters. The stories awsome but you really should take my advice it'll make the story better.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that naraku knows kagome has the jewel... kagome & inuyasha really need to talk about them and the jewel... how did naraku get sesshoumaru... things are getting complicated... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: gfdg
Reviewed By: rgdfg On: March 06, 2008 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love your stories but please make your chapters loger, the suspence is killing me!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should really make your chapters longer please update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... what will kagome say and do... how will inuyasha react... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3[not logged in] On: December 21, 2007 04:31 CST
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liked the chapter...update soon please...ideas for this? Uh..You could make kagome act all quiet and silent and like have her just not talk to him and he'd be all worried but start yelling and askin her why she wnt talk and they get into a argument or something...Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... so kagome has the jewel... what will happen when inuyasha finds out... hope inuyasha & kagome still stay together in the end... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: darklady405 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Inu Yasha and the Gang spilt up and keep an eye on Naraku who is trading for illigal weapons. Kagome and Kykio fight in the lunch room and both are suspended. Inu Yasha goes and visits Kagome at home......then i don't know :P. Im don't know alot about your writing style but thats kinda the way i write. I hope it helps. I love the story and would hate to see it deleted
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... hope kagome beats up kikyo... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: happy brithday
Reviewed By: serenity rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story more more more oh and HAPPY BRITHDAY
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Title: HAPPY BDAY!!!
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oH WeLL hAPpy BdAY!!! aTLEaST U tRIED UR bEST TO mAKE IT LONgER! lOL HOw OLD dID u TURN 2DAy? i LuB UR sTORY uPDaT3 S00n PLz!
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