| "Railroad X" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: January 29, 2008 04:52 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooo i can understand ^^ i have writers block
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn...I was thinking it might be Bankotsu, what is he going to do to Kagome? I don't think I'd want to be him or Kikyo when Inu finds out that they've been plotting against him and Kagome. What is this secret that Sesshy has about Inu anyway? Something to do with why he keeps transforming into a youkai? Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out. I loved Sango's reaction when she found out about Inu, it was priceless. Great chapter I enjoyed it completely and am looking forward to the next one. See ya in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad Inu...making Kagome late for work hehe. I laughed my ass off in this chapter. Especially when Sango and Eri got into it. I was rooting for Sango to kick her ass lol. I think Eri needs to get a life of her own, and Hojo needs to just give up already. Oh well, I'm happy to see Sesshy in this fic. I wonder if he'll help Inu out with the Wicked Bitch of the East(Kikyo)Anywho, great third chapter. I'm off to read the next one. See you in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, here I'm back with another review. This fic is getting better. That short steamy scene with Inuyasha and Kagome. It sucks that he went through all of that, but I think the reward will be worth it. As to who the mystery man is, I'm still deciding on it. You said it isn't who we think so that leaves the less common Kikyo pairings. Anyway, I can only hope that she'll get hers in the end. Anyway, I'm off to the next chapter. See ya in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kedaku On: October 12, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, I can't believe I forgot about this fic. Well, I'm here reading it now and I'm liking it so far. Did Inuyasha actually kick Kikyo to the curb? I guess I'll just have to read on to find out. I loved how Inuyasha started transforming when Kikyo started talking bad about Kagome. I have a feeling that this will be another hit for you. Again, great fic so far. See you in the next review! -Kedaku ^_~
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... hope inuyasha & kagome stay together... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can...please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eye twitches* Bankotsu!?! HOLY SHIT!!!!! THE 3RD HOTTIE T-T god damn your smart.... *grrr* anyways damn Inuyasha been himself all overprotected... sometimes i wanna wacked him on the head -_- anyways yay you update quick!!! IM HAPPY!!!!
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow.nice one.update soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slump down in the chair* ....... why make me think..... hahahahahahahah my mind tells me Hojo XD hahahahaha!!! anyways ^^ how can i say something bad about your stories if their all good ^.^ please update soon!!! just like Inuyasha... i wanna know more about their history :P
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 13:10 CDT
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you went for the original.most people would put naraku in there.well, ya got me thinking.I can't even guees who it might be.ur story si good.update soon.
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Sweet!! I'm not a big fan of Inu/Kago but it was still awsome.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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