| "Butterflies & The Net" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 07:07 CDT
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I got a feeling this thing is personal... You wear your heart in your sleeve dude. Its a special thing to be able to write our thoughts and its completely okay to take your time. (Heck, it took me 4 years to finish my first fic and get it posted). I saw 2 errors in your prologue but they're so small that your eyes must have gone over it. I'm just in chap 1. might take loads to finish considering the amount of chapters...
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 12:19 CDT
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Oooh, the therapist is SO not using a tactful approach... definately pushing Solya's buttons in the nuclear meltdown sequence... I wonder what the "disagreement" in Jesse and Jerrod's past was? To be honest, I don't know which of them I want Solya to end up with!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 12:19 CDT
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THE RETURN OF SOLYA! Damn, I think my screen was icing up for most of this chapter... the ol' love triangle's out in full force, I see! Well, welcome back and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 06:44 CDT
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Lovin' the return! REALLY lovin' Jerrod's reaction to Jesse. This... along with Solya's intimacy issues... Is SO not going down well.... *sniggers*
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 05:56 CDT
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Yo! Solya's BACK! Can't BELIEVE it took me so long to get back too this... ooooh, what's up with the new therapist? What'd she say to Solya? If she was cruel to our girl... *POW*!
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Title: It's me! Mangaluva!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah-hah! Finally caught up to the story. poor Solya! I already LOVE her and her mates... also rooting for Jerrod to get off his ass and just TELL Solya ;)
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Reviewed By: Wolf Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 12:47 CST
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Tis good... it's wordy, for a prologue I mean, but it's good =)
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Title: LIKE IT ALOT !
Reviewed By: connect_2u [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 12:20 CDT
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Awesome writing! I love reading a body of work that puts the character right at the kitchen table with you .When you read you can't help but love the characters for their own personalities truly you can't help but find a little bit of yourself in at least one of these character . Great work .I can't wait to read more . Keep it up !
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Title: I like! I like !
Reviewed By: connect_2u [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome !I love a story that is written in a way that places right in the middle of the characters lives and you find that as you read theirs a little bit of everyone in each character which makes it easy to connect with the writing . Keep it up ! Love the stuff !
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 15:42 CDT
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Great job! I love that MEdiaminer fnally let it upload!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 15:53 CDT
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I think this is a great story. Please Continue!!
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