| "Emotional Experimentation" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: wow this wuz good and good choice 4 a mentor
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i reli liked this fic and i'm gonna give more of ur fics a read and fyi u have good taste in mentors cuz goku's girl is basically my idol so yea this wuz amazingly good and i'm gonna go read more from u
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as the title of the story says, it was a well orchestrated fic about the emotions that both Ichigo and Rukia felt. I can actually imagine such a scenario happening from Ch. 54(?) (Around 50 something, I haven't read it in a while) when Rukia was contemplating about emotions and feelings and how she was supposed to get rid of them. Even during the final moments of her execution she felt that way, so it was nice to see you write a story about her emotion of "desire" and turn it into a good one shot. It was very well done and overall a pleasant read. I look forward to reading the sequel =DD!
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Title: Stalker is back!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I love this fic! Is so awesome, I love their interactions amd the way is so in character to the Karakura days! Awesome job once again!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oopps I just reliazed I never review this fic of yours! This fic was the first I read from you and I like it so much that I clicked on your username and kaboom I am a stalker! Great job with this one Ichigo can be so shy and Rukia is such an evil *bleep* she get what she wants from him and so does him! I was disapointed when she use her memory eraser but I was happy once I read the sequel! Great job!
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Title: Keep writing
Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writing coz I love ur story. May be one day u can beat J.K. Rowling. Who's now? Please write more and update ONS..I really wait for this story to update. coz every chapter was different esp in sex.Onegaishimasu
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: orionshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to agree that people on this site are review stingy. Your work deserves positive reviews. Please keep writing.
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Title: LoL
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 22:25 CDT
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Thank Goodness a lemon that doesnt contain YAOI!;OMG! the author is Tituba!;Holy Shit! what a "hot" lemon this is!!!>=3 uhh...just a comment about Rukia scratching her itch in class...well think of it, she goes to school "everyday" without bathing, surely she would feel itchy ne...-_-a overall i think the fic is cute...and hot.^-^v
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so special!!! I'm like... WOW!!! She wrote my request!!! And she did EXACTLY what I invisioned... you are turly gifted!!! And this was written with so much tension builing up the the climactic ending...which was at the first read (did I mention I read this TWICE, and I'm intending to read it again today) was shocking, and I was like, "NO!!! I want him to remember!!!" But then I decided that it was for the best. But This was not out of character, it was perfect with the timeline and you can feel the true emotion of the moments between Ichigo and Rukia. It makes me see how much the emotions are there in the real anime/manga. Thank so much for doing this not only for me, but for all the Ichigo/Rukia fans out here that can't seem to find a good M/F Bleach story out here...this is a diamond in the rough. I hope this gets tons of reviews... everyone is so review stingy around here and other sites... but I want to let you know that you are apperciated; continue to write and I will continue to review. Thanks again!!! gg @_@
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Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I resent that comment about Tatsuki having no sex appeal! *pouts grumpily* But I can't say too much more than that, as always, it was a great story and wonderfully written, but everyone knows that those Memory Replacer thingies don't work on people with high spiritual pressure and Ichigo wouldn't have been affected at all. Whatever, a small glitch is nothing to worry about. Just thought I'd let you know what I thought! Thanks for the story!
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