| "Here To Stay" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: jamabenf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOt bad at all! I would be intrested in reading a normal story with a Selphie like that. I could see Irvine doing that to some girls, such a fucking ass, lol.
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Reviewed By: Notloggedin On: January 20, 2004 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
....This is definitely not NC-17. Try PG-13 at the most. Not a bad idea though. Maybe flesh out the characters more..I mean..I don't think Squall's going to fall for Selphie in such a short amount of time.
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