| "Anniversary" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just... wow... I have to say that this story was amazing. I'm going to put it in my profile of Hentai Epics, and will continue to watch out for this elusive "Special Edition". Hopefully Psianogen will come around to write for AP... I'm tired of searching his livejournal for the slightest hint of completing AP. But enough about that. I have to say that your switchbacks didn't leave me clueless, and the story has a very good flow. I only noticed a few grammar mistakes, but they don't really matter if they're that far and few between. Although the story isn't 100% original (All Hail the great Psianogen! And not so much towards random authors who write "The Spineless Coward Wtfpwns Red Bitch"), your take and plot on it was amazing. I especially loved the originality of the pseudo-world that Asuka was forced to live in, and the gradual, more realistic plummet of her pride to acceptence and revelation. Again, I'm looking forward to the special edition and perhaps a spinoff or seperate story. This isn't the first work of your's that I've enjoyed (Shoutout to Dream Machine), and hopefully won't be the last.
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Reviewed By: Sargentwolf On: August 20, 2007 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make another chapter or sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 00:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
really nice! ^-^v
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Reviewed By: gamerz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story :)
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Reviewed By: Nawa Karageru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel honored to have been chosen to preread this one and that you deemed some of my additons worthy of making the cut. I look forward to once again helping and I also thank you for all the tips and tricks given. Arigato!
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