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| "Vampire Ecstasy" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: maegerakawaii On: October 11, 2007 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an engaging story. I hope you will write more.
| Title: Um... uh... i don't have a title^^
Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, let me start by saying this. I did like your story and i cant wait for an update. I like your creaitivity and originality. I have to question, are the italics necessary outside of the character's thoughts? I understand a word or two thoughout the story but maybe not so much. Thats all the critism for now. I enjoyed your story though. Hopefully you'll update it. I'll add you to my favs so i can keep up with you all right? Byee!!!
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