| "Prisoners of the Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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don't stop now. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mukuro5 On: October 16, 2007 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know I already left a comment but I forgot about a few things. Marik is so funny. Climbing up a tree to eat a squirral. Poor thing. Plus, I loved what Bakura said to Ryou "Don't worry slave, I will let you eat. I need your body to do some…chores." lol 'Chores'. How funny. Okay, I think I got everything. Love your story. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mukuro5 On: October 16, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're style of writing is a bit unorganized. The spelling and grammar needed some improvements. It is a very, very, very creative story. The best Yu-Gi-Oh/Yu Yu Hakusho story I've read (and I've read a lot of this kind of crossover stories). I loved the story so much. Even if it did have spelling/grammar errors I absolutly loved it. Continue to write this story, please. I'll be waiting for the next chapter..."Patiently" waiting for the next chapter. *sitting in chair with a shot gun* Update soon please. ^_^ Oh, and I'll tell some of my friends about this story. I believe they'll like it just as much as I did.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! Thanks for the chapter. This is one of those stories that,I actually look forward to seeing updated. Shadow Doge Ball,um? Think I like it. So, who gets to save Yugi? So looking forward to seeing who or what you come up with.
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks! I like this fic. Don't know why you aren't getting reviews. I've seen worse (crappy) fics get reviews,that didn't make them any less crappy. If you enjoy writing go for it. So it'd be great if you continue with it. You're writing in two of my favorite fandoms, and are pretty faithful to the characters of both.Looking forward to more. Thanks again. And good luck with your review numbers,though they really shouldn't be that important.
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Reviewed By: tinkletimekelly On: July 30, 2007 07:06 CDT
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Good start! Now continue.Please.
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