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| "Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: dhime On: August 10, 2012 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful and very deep! | Reviewed By: ????? On: December 20, 2008 14:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know, the 8 for the enjoyment factor was because of how bad it was. It was so bad it was FUNNY! I mean, wherethe hell did you get 'Ya'pey'? It sounds like they're dogs! Why is ZIM Purple's twin, when Red looks SO MUCH more like him. The whole idea for Purple and ZIM to be related is just stupid. (furthermore you should have incest on your list of warnings) Furthermore, the god aweful OOC-ness. So Purple is the doeverything Sue, while Red is the obnoxious, insensitive teenage girl, and ZIM's the angst ridden, depressed Sue? Got it! ZIM just isn't the stuff you should use for erotica. And WHY THE HELL ARE THEY HERMAPHRODITES!? Only woman have 'moist openings'. Still, this fic is just so funny. I can't believe it has not one, but FIVE sequels! This is so priceless.
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