Reviewed By:~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 21:10 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You have my intrigue! Interested and eager to read more. I like the basis of this story, it is not one I've seen done. I like how you've left this first chapter very in question. I cannot tell what is going to happen or how exactly they feel.