Reviewed By:jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 09:07 CDT Comment/Review: Well I liked twisted fate(though it needs a beta) its still a good story...and this one...well you should update if the plot bunny is eating you alive *grins evilly*
Reviewed By:saruwatari_junko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 08:29 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: not bad on this.. still a bit blurry but forgivable because its still the first chapter.. but please update your work as soon as possible.. good job on putting the most favorite thing i like which is ichi/ruki stuff.. Good Luck..and keep them coming.. p/s try not to think to much new material but instead focus really hard on what you're writing now..you'll succeed.. your new biggest fan!!! JoEY a.k.a. Saruwatari Junko
