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| "Digimon Tamers: Reconfigured" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: So... On: August 05, 2002 21:13 CDT
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Once again, thanks for responding to my previous review.
I wondered if Janyu would stand for this... and it's extremely interesting that he was fully aware of Henry's hobby, and hasn't said anything prior to this.
Henry still holds a grudge about that, I see... It's perfectly understandable. If my father did something like that, no matter what his motivations, I doubt I could forgive him either for robbing me of my best friend, destined partner and such...
Poor Ashley... I'd be nervous too after hearing that.
If your parents don't really want to hear everything that's happened to you, then why ask?
A father who smokes, works hard, carries a lighter, and doesn't know how to respond when his daughter angrily asks if he saves the world for a living... oh crud... Not Yamaki...?
I can see why Ashley would target Rika if she bullied her. If I had the chance to get back at some of the people that hurt me when I was younger... But still, how would killing Renamon help the situation? Better to target the source directly...
Never, never, never use an alleyway for a shortcut. That always seems to invite trouble.
Jeri swearing... Guess she's not the oh-so-sweet puppet girl anymore...
Another overdramatic commerical revealing a situation that might be overplayed, but knowing the tone of your series, might not... Looks like Takato's going over to the dark side again...
Hmm... I always thought doing a retread of the previous few seconds was meant to add a semblance of drama to the situation and further extend the amount of time you have to wait to find out what happens. You want something that really retreads previous scenes, try watching that Big Brother 3 thing: they spend forever showing the same clips again and again and again at the beginning of the show, I guess thinking you'll forget the so-called 'important' highlights in the short space of time between each clip. Blech...
Again the type change card makes a reappearance. Very useful card, that one...
How did Bakemon know where to hit Leomon to reform him into his data and take out whatever was controlling him?
Wallace had two digimon. However, this situation is much more interesting... Nice touch to make that little boy a potiential tamer.
That poor couple... Falling prey to that monster...
I wouldn't know who Talley is without your little note. As is, I can safely say that this just got even worse...
So the good news is that Leomon's back, and there's another Tamer waiting to be paired up. The twist is, with who? My first thought would be that the newer digimon, Bakemon, is supposed to be paired up with Jeri's brother; however, knowing your penchant for twists, it's just as likely that Leomon is supposed to be his, but got stuck with Jeri because of her brother's youth and the fact that she was the sibling availible when Leomon desperately needed a Tamer's assistance. The only way to know for certain is to wait and see...
Also, you're planning to off Shadowdevimon in the nest part? I imagine that if it takes the reappearance of a certain twisted viral Mega gone wrong, it won't be easy... and what's to keep him from going wild after the fight? Plus, recalling what happened to the digital world during his previous awakening... Nope, this is just not good, not at all... | Reviewed By: Pistoffveemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 20:44 CDT
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The short first scene wasn't a deliberate move. I could have been subconciously mocking Fox though...
Henry didn't quite realise Kazu would do something like that.
Takato wan't actually picking on Henry, he was just saying something out loud that he had meant to think.
Ashley understands deletion, but she doesn't yet understand the deep connection between Digimon and Tamer.
Ashley was trying to gain the advantage in the fight without understanding how it affects the Digimon. She's not new to cards, but new to a partner.
Yes, Satamon is a fan digivolution. Impmon's Champion and Ultimate forms are unknown, so I made them up (Yes, this means that you will eventually see Satamon digivolve).
You will be surprised what happens with Leomon in the next chapter. I guarantee it.
Yes, Beelzemon did have guns, but they were different than the ones mounted in Satamon's chest. This is why he was able to hit Kyubimon on the first shot, but only with one.
The attribute changing cards seemed a necessity to me. Therefore I made them.
The next issue has been solved already, so there's no need to address it.
Ashley knows Digimon from the card game and the anime, so she doesn't know that there is no coming back if a Digimon isn't loaded. (There's the Data Release card being hinted at again...)
Rika did what she did for the good of the team, definitely not for Ashley.
Here's where the "R" rating's gonna come into it. Given everything known about Henry from the last chapter and his crush on Ashley from this one this will make for interesting, fun to write situations. | Reviewed By: Well... On: July 29, 2002 11:41 CDT
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First off, thanks for responding to my last review of your previous chapter. Your comments have given me a lot more to speculate on...
...That was a short first part. Making fun of how Fox sometimes cuts off the episode very early on after starting?
...Is Henry just dense or did he honestly not think at first that Kazu was devious enough to do something like that to him?
Okay, Henry's rep is being shot to heck in this, if even Takato's picking on him.
Deletion? Does Ashley even know what that means for a digimon - or doesn't she even care?
Ashley is swiping a lot of cards in a short period of time. Is this supposed to reflect her inexperiance, or does she have a strategy?
...Is that a fan digivolution? Not that I'm complaining, mind you... just curious.
Nice commerical break. More huge spoilers, and yet I'm now really wanting to see what happens even if I've got a better idea than I should have of the plot.
They're forgetting that Impmon has handled guns before in his Mega stage. Since his Champion form here is using somewhat similar weapons, that gives him a bit of an advantage over having to learn completely different styles of attack.
Attribute changing cards... Nice touch.
Okay, that's not good...
...Why is Ashley insisting on attacking Renamon even if it means deletion for both Impmon and Renamon? Is she that obsessed with vengeance for whatever Rika did... or is she mad at Renamon for some reason...?
After all that, Rika is still willing to help Ashley - or maybe just Impmon - out.
So Ashley's moving in with Henry and Suzie for the time being. If Henry is crushing on her, this should get real interesting real quick. I wonder if Suzie will attempt to latch onto her as a sort of older sister... | Reviewed By: Pistoffveemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 19:02 CDT
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Yes, while Rika has changed a lot I couldn't see her seeing eye-to-eye with her mother on that. Therefore I wrote in that scene.
I'm glad you appreciate the challenge Takato faced there. I hoped that someone would understand what I was doing.
As for Mr. Katou's trusting of Bakemon... Jeri's previous partner was a six-foot lion holding a sword. Enough said.
The second I saw the scene I knew that several people would catch the implication and that someone would write a lemon for it. I was right on both counts.
The uploading idea came to me as I was listening to Shibumi ask how much difference there was between DNA and data.
Ahsley will eventually end up with the team (and normal) but... let's just say she's got a pretty full wardrobe of issues (including a last name anagrammed from her real... no... giving away too much)
Yes, Kazu is showing a nasty streak, but there's a side of this you don't see yet.
Morons do Fox Kids' commercials. End of story.
That is something I'm not giving away... yet. Soon the first hints will start to slip through but until then... your guess is all you have. But it's not crossbreeding. | Reviewed By: Interesting... On: July 10, 2002 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Like how you handled Ruki's viewpoint on her mother's warning, as well as their differing thoughts on the subject. For all that's changed in Ruki, it seems she can't yet see eye to eye with her on this issue...yet.
Poor Takato, having to explain that to Guilmon. Even with Impmon's help, it's not an easy task... Thankfully, Guilmon doesn't seem like the type to discriminate, so even if he ever figures it out it shouldn't change anything...
Mr. Katou sure seems accepting of this new partner. Considering that it looks like a fanged ghost, you would think he'd be more wary, but...
...Ouch. I thought that was a bit implied in the series, but since it's supposedly only for little kids, they couldn't confirm anything...
Okay, so now they can upload... this isn't good.
There's something about Ashley that doesn't seem right... How did she know Ruki was a tamer, and that she had Renamon, if all 'fireboid' told her was that she had to replace the twins?
Ouch... Kazu had better keep his mouth shut, or Henry could get grounded for life...
...Kazu has no heart. That's one heck of a mean streak he's showing.
You notice that they do that too, huh? I wish they'd learn to be more careful when they advertise...
Hmm... either Ashley with Ryo, or Ashley with Henry, unless she's got some sort of psycho twisted crush on Ruki... or you plan on pairing digimon like Impmon with humans... | Reviewed By: zzz333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Great story!! Hope you update soon, it was pretty funny too! | Reviewed By: Depressing... On: June 22, 2002 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like the way this is developing, although a few of the plot twists were pretty cruel to certain characters. Still, this has some interesting ideas: I had thought you were foreshadowing that a certain now-tamerless digimon would become partners with a digimon-less tamer, but judging from the ending that won't happen - or, at least, not quite yet...
I'm also interested in how you plan to make your intended couplings develop, and whether or not you will attempt to pair up any of the digimon at all. This is certainly a Tamers continuation to keep an eye on... | Reviewed By: I still like coconuts On: August 14, 2002 14:39 CDT
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who would win ? impmon or coconutmon? and do you like sonic the hedgehog? thanks! | Reviewed By: the coconut guy On: August 14, 2002 14:57 CDT
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do you think hero chao and calamon reladed? and whare is mittinmon!? | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 ] |
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