| "Awakening" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
i HATE cliffys! but it was still great. i wanna know what happens update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really enjoyed reading it... great work... until next time... good job...
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Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm... about the italics and all. if you wright your document on word, an italicize the words on that program, then, after you save it and post it here it will be bolded, underlined, etc. Sorry, thats how I do it, not sure about you, and please continue!!! Turn on your pc and type type type... please ^.^'
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was cool. his reaction to the plotting against the only one whom does accept him. but you left us wanting. kagomes reaction or maybe acceptance?
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Reviewed By: Bamberness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was awesome! I myself love how you inadvertedly told us who had been the one being killed. Bravo! Hope to see more [[if not chapters, then stories]] very soon. I know it's a one-shot, and you said you lost inspiration, but you are just sooo good. I can't make you write anything, but only encourage you! Once again, hope to see more soon!~~~Bamberness~~~
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