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| "every once in four years" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: shourin(too lazy to sign in) On: September 24, 2007 10:47 CDT
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ano..... tenshi is 'angel', not 'angle'. haven't read the fic yet but i'll review again when i read it. tq.
| Reviewed By: Queenphoenix77 On: August 17, 2007 04:37 CDT
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My apologies, that link is invalid. The correct one should be http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1265150/S_P_A_M_S_P_O_T I hope it works.
| Reviewed By: Queenphoenix77 On: August 17, 2007 04:34 CDT
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Ok, this was hell to keep reading, I have to admit. The idea itself is creditable, but all of the characters are OOC. Just a couple of hints. Yes, Tenshi means angel, but Fuji is never referred to as such. The correct word is Tensai - prodigy. Also, the PoT regulars never use -kun as a suffix when referring to each other. They call each other by surname only. I strongly recommend a beta. If you go to www.fanfiction.net/~S_P_A_M_S_P_O_T there are several people there who I'm sure would be more than willing to help you out.
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