| "I'm not fat,I'm pregnant!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Gin_Hotsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best lemon in the eternity of all lemons!!!!!!!! just thought i'd let you know i hope that 1o's are the best because it was
|
Reviewed By: Solli On: March 17, 2008 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the best sense of humor I've ever come upon. :DDD This is so damn funny! And behind the humor and the sex (omg, the sex) you do write really well in general!! Please continue!
|
Reviewed By: Angelcry81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahaha YAY an update! Didn't think I'll review did ya now? Well I wills >( First of all...YAY for smut. Even though I read most of this chapter before you posted... YAY for smut again XD You know I love it babies. The dialog between Kakashi and Itachi is priceless. Every time I read interactions between those two I break out in giggles. *Especially* given the position Kakashi's in. Who's mind having such a hottie as Itachi blowing them? Heck I'd grow balls just to have him lick it... Eh...I'm moving away from the subject. But anyway. YES! lol and of course I absolutely loved the part when Kashi is caught 'walking funny'. You make me laugh like no one else baby! Because I'm walking funny right now, damn you O_o PS my first one didn't go through...only a part of it. How odd. Oh well delete it then
|
Reviewed By: Angelcry81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahaha YAY an update! Didn't think I'll review did ya now? Well I wills >( First of all...YAY for smut. Even though I read most of this chapter before you posted... YAY for smut again XD You know I love it babies
|
Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fan fic!
|
Title: *squee*
Reviewed By: Vega -Lume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed ya sweetie!!! *huggles* Your fics are great! Vel-chan *gropes joey*
|
Reviewed By: Calathiel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 05:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD omg lol, poor Kakashi doesn't even know he's gonna be a dad XD just think about his reaction if anyone told he that he would become one soon ^^
|
Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! ^^ I like this... it's original and the pairing is kinda unusual. Although I usually don't like m-pregnancy, this seems like a good fic. Also I don't like the way Sasuke was portraited (hm, is that a word?), because I think Sasuke has worked hard to get so far... (although I also think he's a bit of a brat), but since it was Itachi's thoughts, I suppode it's okay. ^^ I'll add it to my favorites, so please update as soon as you can, ne? *chu*
|
Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is really good keep writing
|
Reviewed By: Angelcry81 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I ever die of laughter it will be your fault you evil Kakashi fan ><
I'm amazed at how many ideas you go through every day and eternally happy you didn't put this one on a shelf. Of course the fact that I get to see 'you' struggling through pregnancy adds to my enjoyment >D Wonderful beginning baby! I can't even count how many times I broke into laughter reading just the prologue. The idea of Itachi getting a taste of what it's like to be a woman... Oh boy I bet it would be the best revenge if Sasuke could only see it. Awwww I'm so touched you mentioned my unworthy services. ;___; Hopefully the next chapter will follow shortly for I can only imagine what evil schemes you're plotting.
|
