| "The Smell of Autumn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: the smell of autumn
Reviewed By: chahiya On: October 12, 2003 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic. It flowed very nicely, held my attention and has left me wanting to read more. Your muse smiles upon you. May it continue to do so. I look forward to reading more of this fic. Continue with the good work. Chahiya
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... that was sweet and yet nice. Aya-chan is sweet too. Ran is quite OOC, but who can blame him ::shrugs:: Nice work. |
Reviewed By: Nicki On: December 01, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is easily the cutest fic I have ever read. It was so sweet I could feel myself getting a toothache. Normally I'm not an Aya/Ran fan but this fic just made me fall in love with him. It was very good. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Midnight Dove On: February 26, 2002 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi:
Your fic is really good. I hope you write more like this one. Ran/Ken is one of the best couples.
I can't evaluate your english...well. I have troubles with mi own ( It isn't my first language ). So...sorry if I wrote something wrong. ^^
Keep going. |
Reviewed By: Ranma4926 On: October 24, 2001 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOD GODS! THIS WAS GREAT! SUBARASHII! SUGOI! WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE IT! IT WAS LIKE SOME KIND OF PERFECT 1x2 OR 3x4 FIC IN A WEISS KREUZ WORLD, BUT THIS WAS BETTER! KEEP WRITING! I also want to note that when Yohji proclaimed, "I knew it!", I almost fell out of my seat laughing. I can imagine the blond bishie doing that. |
