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| "Flowers on the precipice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a seriously great story!! I really hope to see more of it eventually. I usually don't see AU/AR stories that are this well done. I'm praying that you update soon.
| Reviewed By: author On: August 11, 2007 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the review, Longwinded_38. I appreciate your comments, even though i don't share them. It's no big deal to me if you like the Ichiruki pairing and see them as romantic. I can understand that that is your preference and your opinion of Kubo's writing and you are entitled to it as i am entitled to mine. Thank you for sharing your opinions though and since you were so kind to say you would admit if you are wrong, I hope you will come back and say so if it turns out to be the case...lol. Just kidding. It's just a work of fiction and I write based on my ideas. I hope you will continue to read though, despite your preference. Thanks again for reading and taking the time out to comment.
| Title: Disagree
Reviewed By: Longwinded_38 On: August 11, 2007 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all let me commend you on your writing skills. The story is very good. However, I disagree the whole idology of IchHime, Ruki/Renji. The story is set up as thus Ichigo & Rukia lives are linked through their similar fates. Rukia before she is taken reveals that she has developed feelings for Ichigo. Ichigo later reveals his feelings by going after her, but hides them by saying he is only returning a debt. Kudo Tite has NEVER EVER given any idication that Ichigo has ANY romantic feelings towards Orihime. He only has feelings of friendship. Even up to the current Manga entry he still treats her as a friend making reference that the only reason he picked her up was because there were no stairs and it would be quicker to carry her when they jumped. Your previous reviewer totally contridicted himself when he mention Rukia and Ichigo had a seriously deep friendship. I my adult world that is called Love. And Renji gave up on any relationship with Rukia when he realized she loved Ichigo, thus becoming his friend rather than his enemy. Renji let her go, he knew he messed up. But Ichigo did not, he came after her. His feelings for her become evident when you see the change in his darkened mood when Rukia is not around and how it lighten ups when she comes back to him. Ichigo tells Rukia that she made the rain stop. Orihime has NEVER been able to do that as hard as she has tried. If there were truly a relationship that Ichigo would have anyone other than Rukia it would be Tatsuki, because she is his childhood friend. He only became friends with Orihime because she is friends with Tatsuki. There is NOTHING deep about the relationship between Ichigo & Orihime, because there is only friendship there and nothing more. But if you all want to continue to see something that is just not there, then go for it. Orihime serves a purpose in Bleach but it is not to be with Ichigo. She is the pivotal character who has the crush on the main character and becomes stronger because of the Unrequited love. There is one in EVERY story whether they are male or female. Kudo Tite has plans for her, but it is not in a romantic relationship with Ichigo. Uryuu probably, Renji maybe, but not Ichigo. If I am wrong, then I will be the first to admit it. But until then I will hold fast and true to the love developing between the stories 2 Main Characters Ichigo & Rukia. And please keep writing, you are a truly talented writer. Even though my writing skills leave much to be desired. I am still able to point out talent and you have it.
| Title: Agreed
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely agree with you on the relationship between Rukia and Ichigo. The way that they're set up it more like a seriously deep friendship and could never truly be anything more than that. If the majority of Bleach fans would pay close attention they'd see that very few in the anime have actually seen how truly kind Ichigo is. Isshin only gets hurt by him simply because he attacks Ichigo first and Keigo more or less annoys Ichigo to the point of wanting to hurt him. Rukia hasn't actually seen all of the forms of Ichigo. probably the only ones who have seen the most of Ichigo, other than his family, are Arisawa Tatsuki and Inoue Orihime.
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