| "Is he really my father?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: lol
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh..you write a funny story,be proud! GAI:THATS RIGHT..LET YOUR HANDS SOARING TALENT BURN WITH THE STRENGTH OF YOUTH! ALL:sweatdrops*
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant, if I do say so myself. I really like this chapter and you finally made a real long one. Grave update soon. I'll have the Resident Naruto chapter six up soon in a thank you for a good chapter.
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Title: how dense is Naruto
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I guess this chapter was OK, not as funny as the others but it is expected now what Thank god for Kagebunshin?
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't break for too long I don't think I can take the supsense.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great once again. Make sure to update soon I can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I my god I squealed like a school girl when he was on the show. I wonder, will everyone get their connection back before the big reveal? Update soon.
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Title: I picture it
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I picture the image of Tsunade spitting her Sake as she heard about in advance I was just looking at where it will be written. You can make it even funnier (inconclusive?). Unfortunately ashes are not a good DNA source unless you have a complete bone.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG please update soon. I want to know what happens when Naruto goes on Maury.
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Title: this has potential
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite an interesting twist you pull from your sleeve. Naruto discussing his heritage on a talk show is going to be something hillarious.
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