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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:28 EDT
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ya you updated again thankiees. i know what thats like i'm having a hard time thinking of a new chapter too. i find that if you read more storys you think of new ideas... as for what one i you should have next i think that sango/miroku first and then shippo's little secret it would make more sence i think and also for the people that are going to be reading this story in the future they would probly like it better to to have more lemons lol cuz the people that read these kinda storys like things like that.. not saying that im one of them... lol thanks again for the update and please update soon thanks!
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:03 EDT
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Great Story so far! I want to know what Shippo's secret is. Is he really older then everyone thinks? Is he a girl in disguise? Did he fall into the cursed springs? Am I asking too many questions? Did you know that the Tomato is a fruit? Any way great story. Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Now let me think. Ummm, i would like to know what S/M are doing in the other side of the forest*hehehe*. Awesome job on this chap! THANX FOR THE QUICK UPDATE, AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!! YOU'RE THE GREATEST!!! I LOVED IT!!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was *sweating* a wonderful chapter. I just LOVE the slow torture. I need to take a cold shower now. LOL. I would love to see what M/S are doing, but also, what doesn't Shippo have up his sleeve. (I'm greedy too). You are very talented. Keep up the wonderful work. Thanks for the quick update. More....Please!!!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 09:36 EDT
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Jeepers, you're killing me here with that speedo. You do realize that the men who have the body to wear them are never the ones who actually wear them. Nope, it's always some fat or wrinkly old prune with shoulder hair long enough to braid. Ok, that's a little off topic. Sorry. Hmmm, you could always throw Sesshomaru a bone - he's always a great source of entertainment. Oh, absolutely clue us in on what Shippo has up his hakama - well, other than the tail and the obvious bits. *shudders*
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 07:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some of both? Shippo's secret AND some of Mir/San? (all right, I admit it -- I'm greedy...LOL)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 06:52 EDT
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Damn, that was hot. Really, really hot. Sometimes, it's the slow and tortuous route that works best, no? Now, for the other... How about Shippou, more IY/K, Sango/Miroku, more IY/K, maybe some angst, a fight or two, more IY/K.....ok, so a lot of IY/K! Just keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked these past few chap's! Sorry i did'nt review sooner. I'v been busy lately so yah. Well any who you're chap's totally rocked, they were AWESOME!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!!! YOU'RE THE BEST!!!
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Title: ????
Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was that it? Please tell me theres more. I like your story. It's a cute little story. Loved the sex sence, although I don't see how or why or if a girl would give a bj the first time, as I personally am just too shy and wouldn't do that type of thing till my hubby and I were married for quite some time. I will say though that if I had a bonding that made me crazy till I "did it" I probly wouldn't have had any problem what so ever with a little bj action. LOL ;) I like it. keep it up. I wanna see more! ;)
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 21:08 EDT
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What a story. What fun. Verbal cannonball, splashing us all with that lovely lemony excitement...well done!
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Amazing. What can I say. I love your story. when I see the update in my inbox I just up and down and get all giddy! Thank you for a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. Love you fast updates! Keep up the terriffic work!! YOU ROCK! --- Amy
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Title: Actually...
Reviewed By: RyuuMahou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:42 EDT
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I happened to notice that those paragraphs are indeed at the bottom of their respective chapters. And don't worry, you're not the only one who hates their computer. I've had my laptop for four years and I beat it up about as much as Sango inflicts bodily pain onto our dear perverted monk. Great story by the way, very interesting! And Myoga, he's just the middle man...no backbone what-so-ever...Anyway, I hope that you get a new chapter (or two *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*) up, it would be greatly appreciated, not only by me, but by all of your other fans! And I wish that I had more to say so as to make this review longer and make you feel more special, but alas, I can't think of anything more to say. ~Emi
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 15:25 EDT
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*shyly scrapes toe of 4 inch, black dom boot through the dirt* Awww, shucks. Love you too, man. Looks like we got us a mutual kiss-ass society going on. Shhh, don't tell anybody. It'll be our little secret. *smacks forehead* Oops!
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 15:19 EDT
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Nice! I enjoyed it so far and enjoy that you tastefully bring in payback and sex. Shippo is the most astute ten year old.
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 14:34 EDT
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yea thankiees i know how mediaminer is it always does things like that i tried to fix one of my storys and it took 3 days for to show up but thanks for showing the rest of the chapter it made me really happy! ^.^ and also im happy cuz u said my name lol yea me! lol please update soon cant wait to read more and one more thing i just read ur story like a hour ago and then you had writen that a/n and had read my rewiew and stuff and i just want to say wow your like a really fast typer i could never type that fast lol but please update soon much thanks -xkagomex-
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