| "When Things Go Awry" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 05:08 CDT
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I just discovered this & read it in 1 go, except for all the word choice errors it's pretty good. You have a small goof all over the place, you're is a contraction of you are, your means belonging to you so you have you're all over when it should be your, as in your heritage, your mother, etc. Also I think Ranma's mother's name is Nadoka. Hope this helps.
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Title: YAY IM SOOOOOOOOO GLAD U CONTINUED PLEASE WRITE A NEW CHAPPY
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
PWEESE
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thansk for that very very nice story with many waffy scenes! Hope to see more of those as well how the story continues. Thanks and please continue soon. ;)
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Title: HELLO TIMES UP WHERE THE HELL IS THE NEW DAMN CHAPTER!!!!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:10 CDT
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GRRRRR NEW CHAPTER NOW NEW CHAPTER NOW I WANT A NEW CHPATER RIGHT DAMN NOW COME ON DAMIT I WANT A NEW FUCKIN CHAPTER!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: March 14, 2008 18:27 CDT
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Sometime in the next two months? *eyebrow starts twitching* Is that some kind of joke? Because it just plain sucks, ya know. *sighs* Anyway, write mother fucker, it doesn't take 2 months to pump out 5 pages of writing. Hmmm, I guess that;s soemthing I need to do myself. Neh. ALright, update again soon, sooner than 6 months! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: words On: March 14, 2008 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
So let me get this straight you're resurrecting Inu-Yasha as Ranma. Then turn around and end Ranma & Akane, even when he rescues her? HUH?
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Reviewed By: Chapter 2 On: March 12, 2008 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, but once again you spelled Nodoka's name wrong. Does Ranma still have his curse?
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. But Ranma's mother is called Nodoka, not Nadoka.
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