| "Links Gay Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Jezebel On: May 31, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear lord that was the stupidest shit I've ever read. There's the start where some common criminals manage to actually sneek up on and tie up a WARRIOR who could obviousely KILL THEM ALL with ease, and then when he finally wakes up you make him too weak to fight? As if THAT weren't painful enough there's still the lemon! Would you ACTUALLY get that easily turned on by some guy who's RAPING you? And do you know how gay sex WORKS? Obviousely not since he managed to come in HUGE SPLURTS after having a virgin asshole (which was TIGHT as you said) ripped apart by some guys cock? That and Link's dick was getting stomped on before, he would NOT be able to get it up, let alone have an ORGASM after all that. Link isn't some stupid whore with no self respect, maybe have someone who isn't a friend of yours proof read your fanfics before you force more poison on us readers. No, I'm not being a mean/retarded bitch, don't let anyone convince you of that because then it'll really confurm the possibility that you're stupid.
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Title: Hylian or American
Reviewed By: Teen Titan Selene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh? Is the army that Link was Destroyin' is Hylian Or American? P.S:Please Tell lynn To Shut UP!!! Cuz She's sain' a bad word so She IS SOOO MEAN!!!!
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Title: urm...i agree with the others...
Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, seriously, this was one of the worst fanfics I've read. I thought it would be humorous by the title...you know, slightly funny with a lot of seriousness...but no, I was left with screaming "NOOOO!" as my favorite character was raped. Um, yeah. Not trying to be mean, but maybe you could try better with your grammar and mini-plot lines. They weren't that great. Sorry.
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Title: don't take that crap!!!
Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to those basterds!!!!! thair just being bitch's!!!!!! and so what I the speech is a little off it's good for a first fic!!!!! up date!!!!!!:D
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Reviewed By: Wolf_ODonnell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you doing? The speech is cheesy, the presentation is awful... Speech of one character must no occur in the same paragraph as the speech of another... Redo the fanfic completely and strip out the rape. I highly doubt that Link, capable of defending himself against zombies, reanimated skeletons and huge monsters twenty times bigger than him, would be so easily overpowered by three common criminals. |
Reviewed By: lynn On: December 02, 2002 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell were you thinking? this story is way too scary for zelda fans to read. link is my favorite character and you had him raped. whats the big idea? |
