| "The Legend of Zelda: A New Begining" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: shadow crazed 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Try writing with spaces inbetween the sentences and paragraphs, it would make it alot easier to read!lol anyway back to the point purty good purty good keep updating
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Reviewed By: Kandy K [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks. HEY! What's wrong with me?! Besides I like saying chappie.
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 18:56 CDT
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Hey. I LOVED THE PART AT THE END! YOU TWO ARE WEIRD! BTW, nice chappie! Oh god. I'm turning into you! AHHHHHHH!
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Reviewed By: Kandy K [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 00:13 CDT
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Thanks. I know, but sometimes, when people are arguing, or something I do that, but I try not to. But thanks, it helps for the future. Kisses KK
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: lil lovely angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i do this to everyone i review i give criticism. first off, when you sorta have the characters speaking and their words together sorta like *uses one of her stories for example" "you do die azmara." "no not now." something like that is hard to determine who is speaking. thats about it for right now. i only got around to read chap 1 because i have work. i promise i'll read more. i like your story so far. cant wait for more and thanks for review LOZ COD for me^^ you're awesome
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Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 19:45 CDT
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Hell! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 13:45 CDT
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VERY GOOD! I love it! I'm trying to get chapter 6 done on mine but I have writer's block! DAMN IT! Oh well. BYE!
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Title: Very cool.
Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 14:21 CDT
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Very cool. where will this go? I am glad that you liked my new chapter. but I need help with the next one. Give me some Ideas. BYE! KELLY LEAVE MY DAMN PHONE ALONE! sorry got to go.
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Reviewed By: Kandy K [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 02:52 CDT
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In order. Thanks. Your welcome. Good. And I just updated. LOL Keep writing. Kisses KK
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Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 16:18 CDT
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AWESOME!!! Thanks for reviewing one my fanfic. I will update soon. UPDATE SOON!
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