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| "Shinigami, Shinobi, and Protector" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: May 02, 2008 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story shows promise so I hope you will update soon. I can't wait! Also this story has given me an idea for a similar story but from a different angle. What if on the day Naruto graduates from the Acadamy, Ichigo, the shinigami that sealed the Kyubi, shows up proclaiming to be his godfather. I leave this idea in your capable hands. Later days!
| Reviewed By: Kai Dragon Master On: September 02, 2007 14:47 CDT
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Great. I vote for Temari, Soi fong, Yourichi, Hana, Nemu, Maybe Anko.
| Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: Reader-of-Many On: August 13, 2007 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I really liked your story. You don't find a lot of Naruto Bleach crossovers and I like them, especially when Naruto gets a harem, seeing as how he deserves it. The girls I would want in the Naruto Harem are probably a kinder, older Hanabi, Hana, just 'cause I like her, Fem Haku, and Tenten, because I have been influenced by other fanfics and I think it's a cute pairing. The girls I would want to see in the Bleach Harem are Soi Fong, Yoruichi, Tatsuki, Hinamori, who REALLY should become attached to Naruto and not Aizen as he's a sadistic B****. Oh, um sorry about that. As for the other questions, PLEASE don't add a DBZGT twist as that might screw up this wonderful story. I probably would still read it though, so its only my opinion, no offense. Garaa shouldn't be killed as that would be wierd and wouldn't make any sense as he has an almost IMPENETRABLE wall of sand to protect him (duh). As for Naruto's training, I really think that it would enrich the plot, but for some other readers who don't follow really long stories, I leave that up to you. Um... is the Kyuubi female? Hopefully, Kakashi and Sasugay are not pricks with sticks up their asses. Naruto can have a harem bigger than 9 correct? I think that Itachi should leave other survivors and such, if only for other character's pairings. I'm not sure about the Naruto during Rukia's rescue thing, but it would be kinda cool if he suddenly appeared at soul society and was powerful at the age of what... five? Naturo should not be a Vaizard as that would conflict with Ichigo and that would be wierd. "..." *sigh* (hears Kakashi's and Jiraiya's perverted giggles) Yes to your last question I guess. Good fic I liked it a lot.
| Reviewed By: Uber_Dude [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 23:03 CDT
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good :D all i can say is that you should try to update faster but you don't have to make sure you just get one out once a year :/
| Title: Why not
Reviewed By: XoreandoX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok here are my list of harem girls Hinata, Female Haku, Temari, Ayame, and Anko Nemu, Orihime, Soi Fong, Yourichi Pretty good story so far wish it could be a bit longer but so far so good also I wouldn't stick too long on the training maybe 2-3 chaps because if you strain too long on it, it will get boring fast with the extra day by day or month by month style of training. Naruto should come to soul perhaps after the Co. recuse Rukia because it kinda be awkward for him to meet Yourichi if it is before. No Vaizard for Naruto since he already has his demon form and not to mention it would clash with Ichigo being a Vaizard. I rather have a Non-Emo Sasuke I mean a rather annoyed and pissed off Sasuke due to fan girls liking him for something reasonable is better than "Oh GOD HE'S EMO GO FOR HIM" so no to the mass slaughter at least not caused by Itachi No to Gaara being there for slight obvious reasons about covering up about the death of a kid with sand armor and the village using him as their ultimate weapon Again good fanfic and i hope i actually helped do something with my cruddy review
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