"Into the Future and Back" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 22:29 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nooo!!!...v.v She died..Bless. D= Man, I cried..It felt like soemone squeezed my heart, and that it exploded. It hurt. v.v..Pity Sesshoumaru. Other than that.>Everything was great..I thought the ending was just a lil' bit cheesy though. Awesome job, and keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 14:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good update. ...How can we be sure that a bullet to the brain can kill one on Narakus incarnations when their bodies don't seem to work like normal... I mean hakudoshi was cut in half, Kagura goes around without her heart in her chest and Naraku has been blown to bits more than once. I don't know... I think I would at least had her go and destroy the mirror as well. OK that's my only criticism/question, but otherwise everything else is fantastic!
|
|
|