| ""Probably"" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RinSess4ever On: November 23, 2010 12:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good!can you write more of the story? i think it would be great! |
Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 10, 2008 15:06 EST
Comment/Review:
Yep Sesshomaru's goning to kill him
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Reviewed By: Matt Gross On: October 05, 2007 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. I think Rin and Kohaku. Do you think you could write another lemon story about them. I have not found many of them.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was all, like, mmmm, that's nice, then the last part, I was like, WTF? Is it possible to do that? Make it all yummy, then all funny? GREAT JOB! ^^
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