| "Everyone Else is Doing IT" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sneaky_Cow On: October 23, 2007 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do i like ur fic...well for starters it's original, it's not AU...it's got really amazing humour...ummm...ur style of writing is really easy to read; it flows naturally. I love the plot so far..can't believe Naruto can't see Neji's the stalker then again it is soo like him to be that naive! That's another thing, u keep the characters more or less "in character" I really appreciate that as a fan...u successfully incorporated our world and theirs with the fanfiction thing...even the title's pretty clever..lol...Everyone's doing IT... I cracked up over that...yeah, as u can see, i can ramble on and on and still not say anything constructive..i am waay too biased towards this fic...it is one of the best in my opinion, you are really thorough and i have yet to find any errors...basically, u rock! :D *shuts up*
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. It has a good plot. Does Neji get Naruto in the end??? I want to know. Please update. P.S I can imagine Gaara trying to molest Naruto.
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Reviewed By: Rilandina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 18:14 CDT
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Thanks so much for the update! I love your fic, but I hate cliffies! XP Update again soon, okay? I'll check in every once in a while. ^__^
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 16:46 CDT
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Don't complain, you're lucky you're even getting reviews on this site....ever check the other fics? As for you're Chapter, I liked it. Thanks for writing. Later
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Reviewed By: anime-luney [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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im a friend of this persons account but out of the two of us im the only one that does anything on it. anyway i wanted to say that i enjoy your writing alot tho at points it doesnt make sense (since they are still ninjas with comps, cells, and are still writen about, etc.). But it is well writen and i look forward to everytime you update. i check every week ^^ this is a interesting fic and is very very original that i must say. Your style of writing is different then what im use to with my friends and stuff but thats not bad. actually i enjoy it every much and this that it is very well writen and your style great. Your grammar is odd but it makes sense there are parts where i have to reread a section just to make sure i got it right but other then that nothing really. my favorite parts are the ones where they are online chatting and also the time sasuke came over and read some fic at narutos house then kissed him! that was so funny!! anyway keep writing i look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Keeta101 On: October 17, 2007 23:50 CDT
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ZOMG! o___O! Naruto/Gaara limey-ish! Ick. >.< Isn't it a bit like incest...in a way...? Owell, it's very entertaining. XD I like the story so far. Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: October 17, 2007 08:06 CDT
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Ah man I loved the update. Poor Naruto is getting molested XD Well some might not exactly pity him aye
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 18:14 CDT
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You know I really would like to see a little Gaaara/Naruto lime. Maybe you could make them "friend with bonuses", or "fuck buddies". Um, just a thought. Well looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: darkjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story has become one of my guilty pleasures, and I just have to run and read it everytime I get an e-mail saying that it's updated. It runs the line between crazed randomness and actual plot so very well! I was pulled in by the goofy internet coversations, and I love reading bits where characters are subjected to fanfiction, but now I'm addicted to the twisting plot. I'm a big Gaara fan, so I'm not sure I want him to be rescued . . . ^.^ but I'm sure Sauske will rescue him in time. I look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kali' On: October 07, 2007 12:21 CDT
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ZOMG! you keep stopping at the good parts. XD I am scrolling and reading intesly, enjoying the show when 'WHAMMO!!!' the page ends and low and behold it's the last chapter. ^^ It's really amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up, girl! †•-Kali'-•†
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Title: x3
Reviewed By: WTFRANDOMNESS On: October 06, 2007 04:14 CDT
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You NEED to continue this! It's very entertaining and creative. x3 CONTINUE THIS OR I KEEL CHUU!!!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: October 05, 2007 07:21 CDT
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Hahaha no talking = ramen XD Leave it to naruto to think of something like that
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chapter. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: XxShadowsLovexX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a really good fic. I started reading it and it sounded like it was going to be similar to most fics. But when you start reading it, its something totally different! Its funny and you leave it off in cliffhanger endings making your reader want tot read more. Can't wait for more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was a fun chapter. Like that your not rushing the getting together part of fic. So close, but, didn't happen. Looking forward to your next chapter. And I like the image of Naruto in "Foxy" boxers.
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