| "Preoccupied" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Amet On: August 15, 2007 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah~ hot! My fav. pair, I dont think it's the end rite? i hope there'll be more chap coz i wanna see how things progress for what happened in chap to be real n not just fantasy XD Thanks for the story~
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Reviewed By: Silver Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i can't say much that hasn't been said yet so i'll settle for a "More Please"..
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 04:48 CDT
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Well damn I wish one of them would think of something! Lol that was hot, hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this I can't wait to the next chaspter.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 08, 2007 20:32 CDT
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Completed??!! How unfair!!! We wants more!!! We wants action and togetherness!! We wants....
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Reviewed By: RS On: August 08, 2007 20:30 CDT
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"Yoji ...was just temporarily infatuated with this bimbo...eventually the bubble would burst, her stock would plunge, putting the relationship out of business". You are brilliant, as usual. I laughed so hard I cried on this one. How does SUCH hot stuff and such funny stuff come out of the same person ? Love it.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new story or chapter from you always brightens my day immeasurably, and this one is no exception. So tender, sexy and funny, and such a painful miscommunication that you wonderfully wrote so that your readers could both see it coming and see how small a change it would have taken for events to take quite a different course. A wonderful one-shot, but you can add me to those who hope you continue and show how perhaps both Aya's and Yoji's determinations succeed.
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